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I do things. I write things. Then I, maybe, post them.
I'd say there's a method to the madness, but that method has probably changed enough times for it to be a part of that same madness.
Anyway, I write, so that's what I'll do.
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Nov 03, 2021
You know, the moment I began reading I was put off by the monologue at the beginning. More accurately, I was put off at the fact it had a monologue at all. However, although I usually don't like stories that start off with a monologue (Ignoring the fact that one of mine does the same), this one really pulled me in. I enjoyed the entire thing and everything after that too.
This really is some of the more solid writing I've seen, and it's really up my alley. It's written the way I usually plan to write things, but I end up ruining by rushing myself.
Honestly, great work here. Keep it up!
Oct 28, 2021
Pretty interesting stuff. I will definitely keep reading.
I was going to mention some stuff, but Momentie already mentioned most of them. Making chapters longer and working on how you structure the way it's written (Word choice, separations and what not).
Either way, keep up the good work.
Oct 25, 2021
To:Momentie
Seeing as these three are more or less "losers", they won't be full on drunk all the time college (Key phrase: All the time), but they won't be basically high schoolers either(That's the plan anyway). They're more like young adults who have no idea what's going on so they're just going with the flow. I'm definitely going to try to keep the story going in odd and unexpected directions, and I feel like college is a perfect time for that exact thing to happen.
Once again, thanks for reading! I actually have a lot of fun writing this story instead of the more serious things I usually write (Most of which are unreleased). Not to say I don't enjoy writing those, because I do, but this is a nice change of pace.
Oct 24, 2021
I definitely do, three in fact (Two domestic and one stray). In this case, it's more so the fact that Nick is basing it off of his own experiences (If you haven't read it, the next chapter mentions he used to own a cat). But yeah, out of my three cats, only one of them goes wherever he wants and couldn't care less about strangers. Thanks for reading!
