Aug 17, 2025
This chapter was difficult to follow, especially Zero's POV. I had to reread certain paragraphs because it felt as though I missed important information that just wasn't there.
Then there was the soft changes in POV that threw me off a little, but I've almost gotten used to them now.
I think it was difficult to follow because of a lack of transitory sentances. Certain things happen as though they already were like when Zero was already with Ivy or when he charged the devil or the changes in POV. They were all described as though they happened a paragraph ago. The same thing has been happening during the last few chapters as well, from when the spear was thrown at Zero.
Again, it's "I think," not absolute. It could be, I'm a big ol' dingus or some other reason the chapter was hard to follow. But I figure it's something to keep in mind for the future.
