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Feb 06, 2022

To:Hans Trondheim

I don't think I can actually recall a tournment in an isekai. And that's my favourite genre. Then again, I'm not a big reader and unfortunatly my Japanese slills are... Minimal. To say the least.

Either way, I think I know what you mean. I've come to realize that most people don't realize how dangerous fights are. Although with armour most people should be safe from any bladed strikes.

I understood Kuro's reason for joining. I meant the actual nobals who don't know the saint. It's like joining a fight to the death for a twich streamer you've never watched. Hmm... This gives me many buissness ideas.

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 2

Chapter:10

Feb 06, 2022

Imagine being willing to sacrifice your life for some woman you barely know. Mobles must be dumb.
Although.... I would join just to test out my combat skills. That sounds fun as hell. So I guess I might be worse.

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 2

Chapter:10

Feb 06, 2022

Didn't we figure this out at the beginning of the chapter? That winning the tournment would mean saving Her Holiness?
Or is this just the same solution for a different problem? That being attaining the respect of the Duke?

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 2

Chapter:9

Jan 29, 2022

To:Momentie

I second this. Baka just kinda feels strange. Unless this was some other county and his uncle's just a huge weeb.

Speaking of the uncle. He certainly isn't what I expected. I like to imagine he's that loud on jobs too. Just sneaking around a building then bam! He starts talking. Everyone's alerted and he just laughs, saying it adds to the fun.
Anyway. You did a good job making the uncle's concern and care feel genuine. Both with how he acts and the way Keisuke feels about it. It's always unsettling when a loudmouth gets quite.
So good on ya Gulf. Making care feel real is strangely difficult as I've come to notice.

The Dungeon Party

Chapter:7

Jan 27, 2022

To:EliteWarrior910

Awe, I got here too late.

The Dungeon Party

Chapter:6

Jan 27, 2022

To:Momentie

Oh yeah. If they're not prepared for it, it becomes super easy to sweep someone off their feet. Even as a wee lil' lad, I could knock an older person on their butt with the most basic wrestling technique. That's why stance is so important in all martial arts. Because otherwise, you'd spend the whole fight on your rear end.

The Dungeon Party

Chapter:6

Jan 27, 2022

To:Gulfstream

Oh, okay. I hadn't considered the fact that he might get distracted. I'm the kind of person who can focus on two things at once so that possibly slipped my mind.
I think all you would really need to explain that he's distracted is a quick 'The lock clicks back into place. Damn it,' after Hayami does whatever.

Anyway. I appreciate the explanation. Hopefully Keisuke can weasel his way out of his situation.

The Dungeon Party

Chapter:6

Jan 27, 2022

So... He knew how to get out? But he didn't? As soon as she started acting smug, I would've thought he would just get out.
I don't know. I thought of at least three ways to escape that situation, but it seems like he just let it happen.

The Dungeon Party

Chapter:6

Jan 26, 2022

I have to admit. You really threw me through a loop these last two chapters. I kept waiting for the moment where we would find out 'haha you just jumped to conclusions like the foolish reader you are.'
But nope. Colour me impressed.

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 1

Chapter:14

Jan 20, 2022

Holy dang man. That escalated quickly. I like how she's just ignoring all those red flags. I'm the most oblivious person there is, and even I noticed those flags. But hey. That's love I guess.

This Villainess Chooses to OOC

Chapter:11

Jan 19, 2022

This sounds awesome! When you get the time, could you roast mine?

The Wolf Among Rats
Not mature. That is, if mature is only sexual shtuff
Sorry, none of THAT GAE energy

ALTaccounti's Roasting Book! (Reopened)

Chapter:2

Jan 19, 2022

So... A question if you don't mind. Why is Eve so afraid of Alexander? I thought Molina commited suicide. Sure, Alexander has power, but if he didn't use it in the last life, why would he use it here?

This Villainess Chooses to OOC

Chapter:8

Jan 19, 2022

To:EliteWarrior910

Sorry, I should've mentioned that those issues were for this chapter specificlly. You have quite a few grammer issues in the other chapters, but this one was especially noticable.

This Villainess Chooses to OOC

Chapter:4

Jan 19, 2022

A few things I wanted to mention before I continue.
You have a lot of grammer issues. Missing punctuation, missing 'ed' and 'ing's. And a strange flow. It became hard to follow at times and I had to re-read a few paragraphs and think others over.
Normally I don't mind too much, but it became difficult to read.

Another thing is your dialogue. It felt very... Unnatural. The people talking didn't feel like humans.

Just some things I wanted to mention. I'm actually cery excited to see where this goes.

This Villainess Chooses to OOC

Chapter:4

Dec 10, 2021

Ah, an Attack on Titan fan I see. Unless that was some wild coincidence.

St Chaos Healer

Chapter:23

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