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Student with too little free time, most of which I once spent writing stories for this website. Now my posting is much more sporadic. Always open to a good conversation at @blipxp on Discord. I also used to do reviews of stuff.
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Jul 22, 2021
What a way to get people to chet, the guy be selling it like it's a religion or something... Really looking forward to more laughs in future chapters!
Jul 21, 2021
Very good for now, your descriptions are really accurate, creating a very precise mental image of what's happening - although I feel like this might be dragging down the pace a bit, but still really enjoying it.
Really good start, got me hooked up since the beginning... But, in my humble opinion, some of your sentences are sometimes a bit too long, which makes them not as easy to read as they maybe should. But apart from that, all of it was very well written. I'll go straight to the next chapter.
Orochi got caught fast... Like the MC so far, and really want to see how he evolves. And I don't know how to feel about having understood most of what that Saburo guy at the end...
Amazing, never once in my life did I think i would get to read about cheating in an exam as if it were art... Definitely gonna stick around for the time being! And also, poor MC... That bell always rings in the worst of times...