todorokichan

todorokichan

registered at: Jul 18, 2021
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Sep 05, 2022

"when it's too late they'll realize they lost the moon while counting the stars" gollee Tonegawa with the banger quote man

Overall this was a SUPER entertaining read!!! Haven't laughed out loud reading something in forever, and for that I give props. Your writing style, the way you write, is just hilarious all the time, I don't even know how you do it 😂. The concept of the story is really, really unique compared to all the other romcoms I've read here and anywhere else, and I truly believe this story has immense potential to be the next best thing. I think my favorite part was when they gave him a checklist of things to do when picking up Uyeno, almost like it were a game... and him trying to check stuff off (and failing) was hilarious. This was such a breath of fresh air to read compared to all the other romcoms out there lol.

Also another thing that stood out was the world building, like I didn't think it was possible to go above and beyond like you did here. The fact that the old guy from the toilet stall would end up being revealed as the the founder of the wingman squad is just crazy to me, and other things like that that you wrote make your story 100x better. And how things are generally tied together in the story is what really separates this from other stories I've read in the past.

I only had really one real gripe with the story, which is that there wasn't any actual lessons by the wingman squad or any real wingmanning that happened in the story. I understand there is more planned for the novel in the future, but for a story with wingman in its title, I was hoping to pickup some useful techniques to pickup girls irl lmaooo.

I wish you the best of luck in the competition. No matter what happens, I expect you to continue pushing chapters of the wingman adventures!!

PS: Love the dynamic Ueno and the MC, very wholesome, great chemistry. Looking forward to seeing their relationship progress!

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The Wingman Squad: Why Be Single When You Can Mingle?
Chapter:11