Aug 12, 2021
To:Joe Gold
Thanks for the critique !
I know I lack some knowledge about guns but I try keep to specific terms to a minimum to be clear even for people who have zero knowledge about them. But you're right : I will try to be more precise when I'll edit everything
On the other hand, I'm not sure I understand the problem with speech vs thought : I introduce every speech with a — while the thoughts are only in italics (plus as it is written in first pov, sometimes the thoughts are mixed with the descriptions). Isn't it enough ?
It's just that I don't really like using "" when a simple — is enough. Or is it ? In my country (not english speaking) it is enough, but as I don't read that often in english, it might be a rule that I don't know about.
Please enlight my lantern senpai !
Anyway, thanks for reading and taking the time to comment, I really appreciate !