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Aug 19, 2021
To:takaishi
Thank you for reading! I'll be glad to check out your novel too. :D
Jul 30, 2021
To:Supersession
Yeah, I'd agree with ordinary nature. Yet again it is your novel. Also, thanks for adding to your list! Much appreciated!
Seems interesting thus far. Some larger words though seemed out of place for a casual setting, such as ordinariness. Other than that it drags you in, especially with that opening. It would be much kind of you if you were to check out my novel (Beyond Waters), I'm in need of a bit of feedback you see. Anyways, a nice read, looking forwards to reading ahead.
Nicely done once again. Dialogue as smooth as butter!
Jul 26, 2021
Quite liked the dialogue of the chapter, the characters have nice personality to them and are refreshing to hear bounce back from one another in conversation. Looking forwards to reading onward!
Jul 25, 2021
Interesting, I am quite fond of the intricate detail to the environment, a mysterious story too! A nice read, thank you.
