Aug 22, 2021
To:Supersession
Hello again. Thank you for you checking out the novel and giving some feedback. I'm glad that the read out loud aspect showed its colour.
Whilst I know of the story's niche appeal and difficulty to read, its difficult to do anything about it. The third person POV you suggested would be incredibly challenging to figure out in how to manage the future chapters and arcs I have written and planned out. The difficulty in its nature, I suppose, derives from the series of consciousness style. I was really going for I suppose an epic feeling for the story, which is why I used things like accents and making it in first person. I appreciate the feedback, but once more it will be challenging to make anything happen, with the story being Clay telling a tale to his grandchild, it would very weird in translating that to third person. Thank you for your review. Whilst you do not have to, I'd be happy to see your feedback again and see how you react to some of the later chapters if doable! :D
