Aug 28, 2021
Nice descriptions, dialogue and characters, as well as an interesting hook to get the reader intrigued. Looking forwards to this one. With the genre being isekai, its good to see something of that sort exploring the pre-isekai life of the mc. Having fun thus far and hopefully shall continue doing so later on!
Whilst I'm at it, I'd appreciate it if you could give my novel a try too. I'm in all the need of feedback, so it would be highly appreciated.