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Sep 08, 2021

To:Real Aire

Thanks, I can't say I came up with it though. I got that way of dialogue from the book I'm reading called Ulysses, it's where I got a good chunk of my inspiration from. I'd honestly recommend it if you can get past the difficulty in the read. If you like the way I use dialogue you'd most likely love how they it too. To be frank, my use of the - for dialogue is a messy imitation of what they manage to do with it. Don't think I didn't try to make it unique though, I made my best to put my own spin on it.
Anyways, thanks for listening to my ramblings. I appreciate the feedback, it helps a ton!

Beyond Waters

Chapter:3

Sep 08, 2021

To:Real Aire

I shall do! I'm glad you've been enjoying.
With the lyrical style, I know it isn't for everyone. Ironically enough, a story very much so inspired by western works is rather niche in a west market of anime fans, however I shall take your help in mind.
I'll try my best so that the story lives up to your praise.

Beyond Waters

Chapter:13

Sep 08, 2021

To:Real Aire

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying. It's much appreciated!

Beyond Waters

Chapter:1

Sep 06, 2021

To:Pike

Unfortunate as it is that it didn't grab you, thanks for sticking around, reading through to the end of the chapter. :D

Beyond Waters

Chapter:1

Sep 05, 2021

I quite like the style of writing, some bits were a little janky here and there to my admittance, however it was rather well written. Quite the interesting beginning!

The Second Route

Chapter:1

Sep 05, 2021

To:writingoreo

Thanks, Ill be sure to get round to reading your novel too. Thank you for the feedback! Much appreciated,

Beyond Waters

Chapter:1

Sep 01, 2021

Whilst I must admit that I did not enjoy the characters and world as much as the first chapter and some of the language was a little rusty here and there. I quite enjoyed the flow of the text. I shall carry on reading. Have a good day.

The Divine Punishment

Chapter:2

Sep 01, 2021

Rather intriguing continuation. A mysterious being. Quite interesting. Plus I like how you explored a bit of the Suzume clone and their backstory. Looking forwards to reading on.

Madman's Forgiveness

Chapter:4

Sep 01, 2021

To:Deleted User

Will do! Thank you for reading. I'll check out your novel too, I hope you continue enjoying Clay's adventures.

Beyond Waters

Chapter:11

Sep 01, 2021

A quite interesting idea. Very unique in many ways. The way you thought of how the characters use the kamien is very clever, making it like another muscle to be used in the body. Very nicely done.

The Divine Punishment

Chapter:1

Sep 01, 2021

To:Gyro2077

Already was reading haha. I'm glad you like it!

Beyond Waters

Chapter:4

Aug 30, 2021

Why am I getting likes for this?

I'm not sure.

What.

Me doing whatever I felt like writing because I just thought it would be a fun idea.

Chapter:1

Aug 28, 2021

To:Supersession

Thank you. I took some inspiration from ulysses with the - however I used it for the tale instead of overall. I'm glad you find it interesting.

Beyond Waters

Chapter:3

Aug 28, 2021

To:Supersession

brown if I recall. Glad to see you reading more. I'll do my best in catching up to date with your novel. :D

Beyond Waters

Chapter:3

Aug 28, 2021

Nice descriptions, dialogue and characters, as well as an interesting hook to get the reader intrigued. Looking forwards to this one. With the genre being isekai, its good to see something of that sort exploring the pre-isekai life of the mc. Having fun thus far and hopefully shall continue doing so later on!
Whilst I'm at it, I'd appreciate it if you could give my novel a try too. I'm in all the need of feedback, so it would be highly appreciated.

Madman's Forgiveness

Chapter:1

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