Aug 15, 2021
To:Atharva
What I mean is, if you paraphrase some dialogues and other things you can achieve better clarity without using many words.
Look at this example:
Jack gives the boy a hand and says, "Hey, get up. Tell me What is your name?" The boy gets up catching Jack's hand. "Thank you" saying this much the boy ran from there. "Hey, wait". Jack shouts and calls the boy but the boy runs away without even looking behind. Jack was also in a hurry so he decided to move on.
"Hey, get up," Jack says giving a hand to the boy on the floor." What is your name?"
"Thanks," says the boy, then, without even a warning, he starts running down the street.
"Hey, wait!" Jack shouts, waiting for an answer but the boy doesn't even look behind.
Jack was in a hurry so it was better to move on.
Something like this, but it's only advice.
