Jun 23, 2022
The tension in the three way Mexican standoff was super(session) well executed. Bry-Bry's attitude as he rebelled was written really well, especially considering that the fact that the reason for his actions isn't even outright stated in the dialog.
I think I was most impressed by Marie, though, and how she jumped in even though she had no skin in the game (...as far as I can tell???). And the gremlin continues his winning streak of being compelling as he struggles to establish himself and control the narrative around him. Excellent chapter!
