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Jun 23, 2022

The way you describe action sequences really has me in awe, you have a really deft touch for it! I think this chapter's one of the shining examples tbh, the way that the Calix-Heron fight was narrated was top tier. Can't wait to see Rei's match!

The Artificial Lights of R'veno

Chapter:8

Jun 22, 2022

oh lawd he's geppin

super isekai yes!

Chapter:1

Jun 21, 2022

All the hover cycles and AIDE's unhinged commentating really upped the cyberpunk vibes this chapter! The rigging revelation is so cool, I loved seeing Rex give as good as he got.

Like Harmonica mentioned on a previous chapter, this has a lot of unputdownable energy. I'm really rooting for all your characters!

Red-Black Course

Chapter:6

Jun 21, 2022

The switch to Ai's POV was super compelling, especially the part where she's forced to take off her headphones. You did an amazing job portraying her general anxiety, mixed with what felt like genuine fear? It was a great contrast to Kiro's more lowkey way of dealing with the monsters thing. I'm really enjoying this so far!

Are You Real?

Chapter:7

Jun 19, 2022

this whole chapter flowed so well! this is honestly the most I've liked the gremlin, thank u king for the cheating pro strats. Also sakura-sensei you can't just monitor ur students bladder condition wtf

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:10

Jun 17, 2022

The exam sequence is super tense, you go into just the right amount of detail about the mechanics and the questions themselves for it to be really intriguing. The scene with Bryan had a lot of slice of life energy, which I liked. The exam gave me flashbacks to college maths, which I disliked. Solid chapter.

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:9

Jun 16, 2022

I really like your little epigraph, it felt super atmospheric and the whiplash of the gremlin waking up right after was a really good sequence. thank you for introducing me to bryan, I'll be taking him.

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:8

Jun 14, 2022

you made a chapter basically explaining the mechanics of the system entertaining! and also said the word boobies 6 times. keep up the good work

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:7

Jun 12, 2022

angry girl ilu but you will never take Ichika's place in my heart. she's Ichika for a reason after all

My First and Last Kiss Was With You

Chapter:4

Jun 12, 2022

Seconding what znf said about the backstory with the teacher, though I will add that it was fun to read. Having a blast imagining Ichika JoJo-posing around the school.

My First and Last Kiss Was With You

Chapter:3

Jun 12, 2022

Please tell me she's dumb please tell me she's dumb I want some dumbass representation!!! also you just went ham on the meta huh, having an LN protag observe how LN protags are usually meant to be projected on to.

My First and Last Kiss Was With You

Chapter:1

Jun 12, 2022

hype hype hype hype

My First and Last Kiss Was With You

Chapter:0

Jun 09, 2022

WHY IS HE ALWAYS SO HORNY

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:5

Jun 07, 2022

I'm really into a lot of the choices you've made with the narrative to give it an oomph, but I think my favorite is the static-y vibe of the train of consciousness when the gremlin was putting together what happened. Definitely liked the part where you used white space to indicate the action as well. Hated that one of the characters was wearing a skinsuit the entire time.

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:4

Jun 06, 2022

I'm a dumbass, I forgot about the GL tag and was genuinely shocked when she was a girl. This is a super promising start!

Miru-senpai Doesn't Like Girls!

Chapter:0

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