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Jun 14, 2022
you made a chapter basically explaining the mechanics of the system entertaining! and also said the word boobies 6 times. keep up the good work
Jun 12, 2022
angry girl ilu but you will never take Ichika's place in my heart. she's Ichika for a reason after all
Seconding what znf said about the backstory with the teacher, though I will add that it was fun to read. Having a blast imagining Ichika JoJo-posing around the school.
Please tell me she's dumb please tell me she's dumb I want some dumbass representation!!! also you just went ham on the meta huh, having an LN protag observe how LN protags are usually meant to be projected on to.
hype hype hype hype
Jun 09, 2022
WHY IS HE ALWAYS SO HORNY
Jun 07, 2022
I'm really into a lot of the choices you've made with the narrative to give it an oomph, but I think my favorite is the static-y vibe of the train of consciousness when the gremlin was putting together what happened. Definitely liked the part where you used white space to indicate the action as well. Hated that one of the characters was wearing a skinsuit the entire time.
Jun 06, 2022
I'm a dumbass, I forgot about the GL tag and was genuinely shocked when she was a girl. This is a super promising start!
The escalation of the action here was amazing, the bike chase was really well written!
Jun 05, 2022
Asagiri is basically a cat I love her so much already
Jun 04, 2022
I would pay you real money to introduce a character that didn't give me anxiety. Love these assholes tho, the toilet scene was terrifying
Jun 03, 2022
Oh no....the 'sus' section threw me off and didn't prepare me for the subtle sads and the real sads near the end :(
I think it speaks a lot to how well you convey personalities and motives that it's only been two chapters and I already want to punch your protag's lights out and pat his head. Amazing!
Jun 02, 2022
This seems so cute and fun! Excited to see more
Hey this seems pretty cool! Ashtin is one of the most intriguing characters I've read about in a while, excited to see what happens! Cute is justice!