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Jul 14, 2022

Okay, the eerily calm little sister wasn't what I was expecting, lowkey obsessed with Hakuro now. You revealed the dynamic between the siblings while maintaining the mystery, and staying true to the distinct narrator voice. I'm really impressed!

When My Ex-Girlfriend Came For a Visit, It Was Raining.

Chapter:2

Jul 14, 2022

I'm vibrating this premise is so exciting! I really liked the distinct tone of the narrator's voice, I'm a sucker for protags with strong, well-defined personalities. The little details you added about the narrator's life really helped to set everything up for the big reveal at the end. Excited for more!!!

When My Ex-Girlfriend Came For a Visit, It Was Raining.

Chapter:1

Jul 13, 2022

I've been rooting hard for Rei this whole time, but this chapter made my heart hurt for Calix as well :( You did a great job making their dynamic as brothers seem complex, with an undercurrent of love. Loving this as usual!

The Artificial Lights of R'veno

Chapter:12

Jul 13, 2022

I'm so excited for this it's such an interesting premise! You did a really good job setting up Chiffon as a super elegant princess with a mallet. The phrase that really resonated with me was when she said effort was unsightly, because that's such an interesting starting point for a character. Definitely looking forward to reading more of this!

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:1

Jul 12, 2022

I actually got so excited for the premise as soon as I read the synopsis, and this delivered so hard!!! Even in one chapter you juggled the character interactions so well I'm in awe. Really excited for this!

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:1

Jul 03, 2022

day 500 of begging you to sub me in for abel on the reina chapters coach i can do it

City 48

Chapter:9

Jun 28, 2022

10/10 thank you for this dating sim where I watch questionable cartoons with the love of my life. kind of freaked out by the implications of Banana Man but that is drowned by how much I love reina

City 48

Chapter:6

Jun 28, 2022

aw hell yea get dunked on

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:13

Jun 24, 2022

The section about the Blumen's thoughts is insane, I'm amazed by how atmospheric and trippy you made it seem, juxtaposed with her heel snagging on a nail. !!!!! screaming

City of Flowers

Chapter:5

Jun 23, 2022

It's really interesting that Shelly's already requested a transfer, though I guess that was kind of hinted at through her behavior last chapter. also the KMA stuff was just there to kick my ass specifically huh, I was so sure that would play into it. Also your director saying he dreams of letting children avoid trauma really shouldn't have made me as anxious as it did.

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:12

Jun 23, 2022

The tension in the three way Mexican standoff was super(session) well executed. Bry-Bry's attitude as he rebelled was written really well, especially considering that the fact that the reason for his actions isn't even outright stated in the dialog.

I think I was most impressed by Marie, though, and how she jumped in even though she had no skin in the game (...as far as I can tell???). And the gremlin continues his winning streak of being compelling as he struggles to establish himself and control the narrative around him. Excellent chapter!

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:11

Jun 23, 2022

The way you describe action sequences really has me in awe, you have a really deft touch for it! I think this chapter's one of the shining examples tbh, the way that the Calix-Heron fight was narrated was top tier. Can't wait to see Rei's match!

The Artificial Lights of R'veno

Chapter:8

Jun 23, 2022

To:OscarHM

Her insisting on covering the bottom part of her face made me really anxious for her re: stubble and stuff. I was probably reading too far into it lol, but the whole scene made me feel for her a lot

City 48

Chapter:4

Jun 23, 2022

I thought it was another convo full of Abel mansplaining manipulating manwhoring but the ending scene with Lexi and the climax of their conversation was really touching

City 48

Chapter:5

Jun 23, 2022

!!!!!!!
Reina's scene was my favorite yet, there was something so compelling about her being so vulnerable (?) and Abel being wrongfooted by it. The part about her being so adamant about hiding herself in some way made me weirdly sad :(

City 48

Chapter:4

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