Nov 22, 2023
To:Anime07
Thank you for the feedback! It is very much appreciated. Given the limitations of flash fiction I know there are many questions about the protagonist. Their nature was different and no amount of nurturing or bullying made them "normal". It became a "fatal flaw" in this tragedy when they failed to change or adapt as you noted.
In the future, I will get better at conveying information about a character and improve my ability to show it instead of telling it. Thank you again for the read and the critiques! 😁