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Aug 04, 2022
I now understood a bit where the story is going😅 but not very well the story development is great I need more chapter. So.... When is the next chapter. BTW I think our boy is turning to be popular bit by bit
People who usually smiles a lot are always hiding a sad past.. Now, this made me think why chose to be a superhero and keep a smile on her face. That girl needs someone to open her heart to. Ren! We've got a job for you! Save Emma! Since he's playing the hero role as well 😍 I liked how you managed to go through all awkward moments as Ren explained to Adam. Obviously Adam in lead now although he doesn't want to play. (Ironically😂)
Aug 03, 2022
Great idea but i think you should review the grammar and... I think some sentences were missing. check them once again and you are good😅
To:Deleted User
I am trying to build a good character so if anything happens and I decide to write a second volume then I will be having an easier time. Just in case 😅
This is my first time reading a Harem genre and i must admit i am enjoying the first chapter. Aito is an annoying character really. I want to punch him but... I should wait to make a proper judgement😅
I swear this Darpan is hding either a very important secret or an inbelievingly ridiculous one i liked the chapter i smell some major events coming soon 😅 i hope so 😍
To:Kyoshiro
Yes he is acting acting a bit unusual. The boys met three of the old members of the Red Claws so... Yeah they had a bit of difficult time not that they were going to lose or anything it's just the enemy was stronger than usual so they retreated to think.
Aug 02, 2022
To:Ben
Thank you 😍
he's trying to be one 😅 i thought it's high time to shake Things a bit to make him get closer to the other members of the squad
I just couldn't jump from the fight outside immediately to the fight inside it without preparing the stage for that but yeah globally that's what I am doing. You try reading a whole chapter with all it's parts to notice the same thing😅
Today i've only changes only on one chapter "This isn't training part1" The other will be uploaded again in the near future. I hope so. Enjoy this chapter! Stay safe and thank you for reading.😍
To:Xiellion
Thank you for the feedback. It wasn't my intention to talk about the past of each member in this chapter in particular... it was just a moment where shinji started thinking about the past before to sleep. The past of each member will detailed in the future. I know that it's a little bit boring but you can tell that it would be a little bit anticlimatic if I made them use some dialogue there... You can feel that after reading the last paragraphs when he starts accusing himself of being useless... It was all a kind of.... uhh....monologue! Anyway i will take that into considerisation and see what I can do. Maybe some changes 😅. Thanks for the advise!
Aug 01, 2022
Wow that is really a long chapter 😅 As long as it is good I don't mind 😂
The first one to discover the answer yes! Thanks you for the feedback😍
Finally I can start reading a novel from the very first chapter!!! This the first time I see someone interrested in Junji Ito😅 Is it because of Uzumaki? Anyway... I liked the chapter. You've really done a good job in the description of the protagonist's appearance, Mayu and the new transfer student. I felt like most of the events were expected in this chapter. Not a bad thing. It's just after reading and watching many animes and manga I started to feel that there is always this transfer student that will make first contact with the protagonist in his first day i school... Everybody loves and I love it so there is no problem 😍 Am i going to read next chapter.? 😅 You bet I will. Continue!!!😍
