Jan 20, 2018
To:James K.
Oh my goodness, thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback. This is the 1st fiction story I've ever written so I'm happy you liked it. Not describing the environment is something I chose to do to put the reader into the perspective of Nagase. Once she gets more familiar with her current setting the more I have planned to describe her environment. since it is the beginning of the story and a new chapter in Nagase's life she has been unable or more often unwilling get a sense of her new home and school.
I love fiction but something I have noticed is the lack of describing a setting or even a person through senses other than vision. I understand that can be hard to put into a story while also keeping the story moving. It's refreshing when I see it in other stories and even more so when I write it. My synopsis was probably my favorite thing I have written in a long time just because of that feeling of true and utter understanding.
I will definitely take your criticism to heart. knowing that I can give you and hopefully other people that sense of melancholy from a character that experiences the world differently than the world around her makes me really happy. Thank you again!
P.s. I try to edit my chapters as much as I can but I'm not great at it by any means yet XD. Hopefully I can fix that in the future. Not editing this comment though, the text box is so small it is driving me nuts!
