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Just another writer/reader like you!
Hopefully, one day my writings will become a book that many people come to love and be inspired by.
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Aug 11, 2023
i like the class system it’s interesting to find out what abilities do what. Kaiser is a cool guy and he makes for an interesting teacher, very easy to imagine who he is as a character. Plus, the two main characters true motives are fun to see and find out!
Aug 07, 2023
To:Died in Vain
Thanks for the comment it means a lot and maybe i'll edit in a description of them at some point or a character card like you said to give people an idea of who the characters are physically. Yeah i try to let the characters speak from their own perspective and im glad it had that effect. i hope you will enjoy the rest!
Aug 05, 2023
It's just funny and i like that appeal. It makes me want to continue reading chapter to chapter. It's good dialogue. If you have the time, give my novel a look and lmk! But def looking forward to the rest of this story
Jul 31, 2023
This is funny. It has a subtle dialogue and i think the cover page really adds to it. Will keep reading!
Jun 19, 2023
Definitely liking the dialogue and how they have their distinct personalities + the addition of music knowledge really makes it feel authentic. Looking forward to reading it more!
Jun 15, 2023
This is good. i like the description and attention to detail that you give! It elicits a very warm feeling while reading this and i hope to read more of this story! The familiarity with Japanese culture makes me wonder if you are from there or simply have done good research...
Nov 06, 2022
Pretty cool story, I think I read Why I Write last year and it was dope and I couldn’t stop reading this one either. Good writing and all. Only criticism is the ableist slurs (r word). I felt it unnecessary because the humor was already there and it was a rather low hanging fruit of a joke. Writing was good, characters were good, plot was interesting. Yeah
Dec 07, 2021
Interesting, I felt kinda scared for the dude and also thought who would go out there and alone at that. I'm curious to see how this will go
Nov 16, 2021
Read in one day, it’s something about comedy romances I enjoy…anyways well done. I could see some parallels from other shows and it took a nice different direction all of a sudden I’d been cool with just the harem troll route and the dialogue is really engaging. I hope to write something as captivating as this at some point. The only thing, THE ONLY THING, I’d say was sometimes the dialogue got confusing on who said what and the setting wasn’t super clear but it’s a journal in the style of a light novel so it could be mere stylistic choice. If there’s a 2nd volume, that’s be great to read but it’s a lot of work for free lol
Highly interesting, the dialogue is phenomenal
I like the whole take on the jab of the harem culture, it's quite funny and they all have distinct personalities. It does read like an anime type of text and the dialogue is great. Some lines can get confusing with the placement of it all, but I suspect this being due to its a journal entry of a guy. It reminds me of Oreigaru.
Nov 14, 2021
I’m interested. You’ve done well setting a great theme and allowing the reader to visualize this world. Ambiguous enough to keep reading, but clear enough to understand. Witty character and realistic dialogue and feelings, I’m hopeful to see this continue.
Nov 10, 2021
Read this in one day from a suggested post having signed up today. This was really good and depressing, but expected. In volume 2, I think it would be good for Shiki to truly explore his gender. He seemed much more satisfied being a girl and it suited his personality a lot more. Yuri did drop off a little, but the plot was still interesting. It was predictable, in a good way but also there were some plot twists I enjoyed. If it was me, I'd live with the guilt. I couldn't let someone treat me like that. Him having no self respect led him here and its his own fault. They would be a terrible couple to me LOL good story looking forward to more!
This is very well paced, and I feel like I have an idea of what I WANT to happen vs. what I think will happen. It can't not blow up in this dudes face he's outdone himself this time lmao
just started reading today, it's pretty funny so far. I can only think of how lame this dude is and dudes like these typically believe all girls act like this which is TOTALLY the reason they don't get any, not their attitude. I'm intrigued.
