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Joya

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Just another writer/reader like you!

Hopefully, one day my writings will become a book that many people come to love and be inspired by.

writer instagram: @j0ya.url

registered at: Nov 10, 2021

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Jan 18, 2024

To:Deleted User

Can’t say any secrets! im just really seeing these comments and replying now. Preciate the read! Ur story was one of the best ive read up here u should’ve won :(

Yuzu

Chapter:9

Sep 24, 2023

Really cool concept of the retired life of heroes. You can tell this is well written, with just enough detail and backstory to make us care about their retired life! The dialogue is limited but it works for this story. Nice bro i will keep reading

The Comfy Life of Retired Heroes

Chapter:2

Aug 23, 2023

To:Deleted User

Osaka Industries is fictional haha but i guess Italian people live everywhere!

Yuzu

Chapter:5

Aug 23, 2023

To:Deleted User

Russian is definitely an international language but with the way things are going in the world there could be some apprehension to learning the language. Still, it's better to know two languages than one

Yuzu

Chapter:4

Aug 12, 2023

To:Deleted User

That’d be a crazy boss up, it’s true that the effects of vision loss is reduced by eating fruits but literal blindness, something different lol

Yuzu

Chapter:6

Aug 12, 2023

To:Deleted User

Never thought of that name but it’d def add to it, they’re definitely something haha!

Yuzu

Chapter:1

Aug 11, 2023

To:Died in Vain

She’s persuasive but trustworthy at the same time & he's just all over the place lol appreciate u!

Yuzu

Chapter:3

Aug 11, 2023

To:Died in Vain

i think she’s playing pretend and knows a bit more about him than she’d like to admit haha

Yuzu

Chapter:2

Aug 11, 2023

i like the class system it’s interesting to find out what abilities do what. Kaiser is a cool guy and he makes for an interesting teacher, very easy to imagine who he is as a character. Plus, the two main characters true motives are fun to see and find out!

What Clichés has this World Wrought? [ Volume One: Another World ]

Chapter:2

Aug 07, 2023

To:Died in Vain

Thanks for the comment it means a lot and maybe i'll edit in a description of them at some point or a character card like you said to give people an idea of who the characters are physically. Yeah i try to let the characters speak from their own perspective and im glad it had that effect. i hope you will enjoy the rest!

Yuzu

Chapter:1

Aug 05, 2023

It's just funny and i like that appeal. It makes me want to continue reading chapter to chapter. It's good dialogue. If you have the time, give my novel a look and lmk! But def looking forward to the rest of this story

I Ruined My Wife's Family

Chapter:2

Jul 31, 2023

This is funny. It has a subtle dialogue and i think the cover page really adds to it. Will keep reading!

I Ruined My Wife's Family

Chapter:1

Jun 19, 2023

Definitely liking the dialogue and how they have their distinct personalities + the addition of music knowledge really makes it feel authentic. Looking forward to reading it more!

Purple Prose

Chapter:3

Jun 15, 2023

This is good. i like the description and attention to detail that you give! It elicits a very warm feeling while reading this and i hope to read more of this story! The familiarity with Japanese culture makes me wonder if you are from there or simply have done good research...

Sakura Serendipity

Chapter:1

Nov 06, 2022

Pretty cool story, I think I read Why I Write last year and it was dope and I couldn’t stop reading this one either. Good writing and all. Only criticism is the ableist slurs (r word). I felt it unnecessary because the humor was already there and it was a rather low hanging fruit of a joke. Writing was good, characters were good, plot was interesting. Yeah

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:21

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