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Joya

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Just another writer/reader like you!

Hopefully, one day my writings will become a book that many people come to love and be inspired by.

writer instagram: @j0ya.url

registered at: Nov 10, 2021

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Apr 14, 2024

very interesting, i might need to pull my board to envision the game! i like the idea of the WWCF and the writing style makes it easy to envision the setting and the characters are all interesting so far. i hope to continue to enjoy it!

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:1

Apr 02, 2024

Criminally short, but i believe it fits the type of story. Yet, i think, solely an opinion, that you should make this longer to actually make it an interesting book. It begs a question: would you give up your humanity to find out everything you could possibly know or remain a human to suffer amongst those who are like you to potentially find something? i think this story at least makes you wonder, often leaving you in confusion at what you just read. A very lightly done writing style fits the ambience of the story, almost like you’re reading wind. Anyways, from a fellow reader/writer to another, I hope you keep writing. This was interesting

I Fell In Love With The Sea

Chapter:5

Mar 15, 2024

i started reading this and coming back to it, it's clear to me why i liked it. All the characters have their own personalities and there's a certain poignancy and subtle depth to the story that i appreciate. No overdone prose, but good enough detail to understand the scene. i will keep reading!

Vibrancy x Vibrancy

Chapter:7

Feb 20, 2024

So far interesting. i like the commitment to the character’s personality and the fact that it’s consistent. The historical facts, landscape all give it an easy view inside this world. Nice!

Vibrancy x Vibrancy

Chapter:6

Jan 22, 2024

To:Deleted User

He’s Canadian as well, he doesn’t always differentiate what kind of Japanese restaurant:(

Yuzu

Chapter:15

Jan 22, 2024

To:Deleted User

A fateful meeting indeed!

Yuzu

Chapter:10

Jan 22, 2024

To:Deleted User

He really shouldn’t have, especially knowing the dynamics between Rin and Ritsika. Bad move in my opinion

Yuzu

Chapter:13

Jan 22, 2024

To:Joya

Which is why a BS reason like this can be levied off as legitimate

Yuzu

Chapter:17

Jan 22, 2024

To:Deleted User

There’s a reason why he didn’t challenge it because there’s other powers at play.

Yuzu

Chapter:17

Jan 22, 2024

To:Deleted User

i think although she is pretty deceitful with her motives, she means well. And think Shin is the way he is based on his mistrust for her but he also isn’t the most honest either. It’s complex, i want them to resolve it :(

Yuzu

Chapter:19

Jan 22, 2024

To:Deleted User

It’s not explained in the story but he started college when he was 12, hence his knowledge of 6 languages and vast interest and travels to many countries, all alluded never explicitly said. It’s not in the ordinary, certainly not. Maybe on a re-write ill explain some of the things that are knowledge to me, but not the readers

Yuzu

Chapter:21

Jan 18, 2024

To:Deleted User

Can’t say any secrets! im just really seeing these comments and replying now. Preciate the read! Ur story was one of the best ive read up here u should’ve won :(

Yuzu

Chapter:9

Sep 24, 2023

Really cool concept of the retired life of heroes. You can tell this is well written, with just enough detail and backstory to make us care about their retired life! The dialogue is limited but it works for this story. Nice bro i will keep reading

The Comfy Life of Retired Heroes

Chapter:2

Aug 23, 2023

To:Deleted User

Osaka Industries is fictional haha but i guess Italian people live everywhere!

Yuzu

Chapter:5

Aug 23, 2023

To:Deleted User

Russian is definitely an international language but with the way things are going in the world there could be some apprehension to learning the language. Still, it's better to know two languages than one

Yuzu

Chapter:4

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