Katsuhito

Katsuhito

Just a 22 y.o. webnovel writer from Greece ๐Ÿ‡ฌ๐Ÿ‡ท

If you donโ€™t like dope stories, then feel free to ignore this account ๐Ÿ˜Œ

registered at: Dec 14, 2021
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    Participant - MAL x Honeyfeed Writing Contest 2022
    Participant - MAL x Honeyfeed Writing Contest 2023












    Jul 25, 2022

    To:IceDonut

    First of all, let me thank you once again for taking the time to read the novel and for sharing your thoughts through your comments, I was always looking forward to reading them every time I uploaded ๐Ÿ˜
    Iโ€™m honestly glad I could capture the feel of the story in a way that made you feel the summer vibes ๐Ÿ˜Ž
    The only point in your critique I will reply on is the first person perspective. I donโ€™t necessarily believe itโ€™s an easier way to write a novel. Actually I feel it is more restrictive while the third person narration feels more free. I actually chose first person because it is more like YUKIOโ€™s story, and having him narrate it feels more natural. You can also dive deeper into his feelings, and as a reader, you automatically label him as โ€œTHE protagonistโ€ and basically feel like youโ€™re in his shoes. Plus, I feel like I can do better comedy in first person, maybe thatโ€™s just me ๐Ÿ˜… also, itโ€™s kinda more fun to write in first person in general, or at least thatโ€™s what I thought at the start ๐Ÿค” but I really wanna try out third person again, since itโ€™s been a while ๐Ÿ˜Ž
    For the rest of your points, Iโ€™m not gonna comment on and just take them to heart, and try to improve upon ๐Ÿ˜
    Thank you again for everything, and I shall be waiting for your updates in Root Access!
    Till then, take care my friend โค๏ธ

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