Aug 30, 2023
NOOOO I THOUGHT WE HAD AT LEAST ONE MORE CHAPTER TO GO 😭😭😭😭
Man, that scene was beautiful, you don’t have to give up on your magic cause otherwise the world will be all dull 👍 embrace your magic and let it guide you ✨ Masaru is a big old softie tho f’sure 😤
Aki and Taku living together while they pursue their dreams 🥹 HELP ONION NINJAS 😭
Man, what a great crisp story this has been 🥹 It feels like yesterday I read the first chapter, and the summer passed and now we’re here 🥲 Just like it is with real life, blink and you’ll miss it. Honestly, I’m very glad I read this story man 👍 I think the way you made it all happen, and told such a moving, alive tale in such a short time span that felt like it went by in a flash like movie, has me feeling the same I do when the credits for a sweet cool film come rolling down the screen of the theatre 🍿 The way you handled it all brought it to life exactly how it should be, and looking back on it I can see why it took you so long to write ✍️ It’s about telling a story, the way you want, and get the feelings YOU want across to the reader. As far as short reads go, this is one of the best Donut! Thanks for writing my friend, you’re an amazing writer and I’m sad I’ll have to wait at least 6 months for more Donut content, but we’ve waited longer so 🫡 Small price to pay for PEAK! Congrats on finishing! Good luck for the contest and I’ll see you… somewhere 😎
#AkiTakuGang
P.S. I’m just not the guy to ask for negative points, i say everything was perfect 🥹 yes I judge on emotion! 😭 When the feeling subsided however, I make come back with a better review or give you my opinion on discord chat 🫡
