Aug 16, 2022
To:Deleted User
Yeah, Tommy's getting kinda screwed over lmao. I do feel like I am a little cruel on the guy, haha, hopefully I'll get to give him a chance to shine soon enough.
Yes, Valefar is distinctly unlikeable to some degree, heh. Though, the same friend who disliked Jaiga liked him, so maybe he does have some appeal. Also, I should probably re-contextualize the scene to make Jaiga seem a little less dumb, or dishonorable. Somehow I feel like I'm subconsciously making her more unlikeable with each incoming chapter. I think it'll be better if I made it so that she stayed out of the way or something, or recalled that Azama might be dangerous and wants to help to some degree.
Cause evidently, she's a very bad paladin right now, and while that is part of the point, I feel like I'm definitely overdoing it to a extreme.
