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Jun 03, 2022

To:Nika Zimt

Thanks, haha
I've read books that start their book with a poem or lyrics of a song, so I thought it would be a fun idea to do something more "corporate" for this one 😅

Work, Please! ~From World's Greatest Sweeper to the Far Future's Salaryman~

Chapter:1

Jun 03, 2022

To:Nika Zimt

Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it so far 😃

Work, Please! ~From World's Greatest Sweeper to the Far Future's Salaryman~

Chapter:2

Jun 02, 2022

> $300 - Mayu step on me PLEASE
Aki may seem daft for not noticing the writing on the wall, but tbh I'd find it hard to believe someone in my life could be a popular Vtuber.

P.S. Good artist choice on the cover ;)

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2022

To:Fuzzy Rabid Usagi

Yeah, that one too! The other one is actually City Hunter, which the MC is modeled from 🤣

Work, Please! ~From World's Greatest Sweeper to the Far Future's Salaryman~

Chapter:2

Jun 02, 2022

To:Fuzzy Rabid Usagi

Yes, actually! The initial premise was inspired by Demolition Man, it was definitely a fun movie with a fun premise.
As for "Sweeper", it's usually what they call a mercenary or hitman who hangs out in your local bar, same way they call assassins "Cleaners".

Work, Please! ~From World's Greatest Sweeper to the Far Future's Salaryman~

Chapter:2

Jun 02, 2022

So this is a romcom...
I-I'm interested...😳

What Lies Beneath the Surface

Chapter:0

Jun 02, 2022

I like this setup~

City of Flowers

Chapter:0

Jun 02, 2022

You got a knack for writing this action stuff 😀
I think if you can use more active language for future fight scenes, you'll really make it super rad.

Indigo

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2022

Even the waifu rejects you, can't have stuff in Detroit
Consider me interested

FICTION: If you held the power of god in your two hands, would you save the world? Would you doom it? Or would you watch from the sidelines, just as you had done before?

Chapter:1

Jun 01, 2022

Yess, violent opening! Very cool.

Rat's Reason

Chapter:1

Mar 29, 2022

This was really fun to read! Love the way you write.

Amoria

Chapter:1

Mar 17, 2022

To:Israeli Kaiser

Thanks for the comment!
The protagonist is not that much of a silent type, though he does talk less. I don't usually write dialogue for him unless something is happening in the present or he's vividly recalling a memory. Thanks for noticing!

Girlfriend from Another World

Chapter:2

Mar 17, 2022

To:Deleted User

Thank you so much, that really means a lot!
This is indeed my first published writing anywhere. My write-ups were mostly just between friends up to this point. 😅

Girlfriend from Another World

Chapter:1

Mar 13, 2022

To:Bryce

Thanks for reading! Hope you enjoy the next one! 😀

Girlfriend from Another World

Chapter:1

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