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Karian / KomakiP

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Jul 14, 2022

To:Deleted User

Chigusa into some really weird stuff...

Work, Please! ~From World's Greatest Sweeper to the Far Future's Salaryman~

Chapter:12

Jul 13, 2022

To:Deleted User

Yep! 'Rebirth' is memory wiping. It's also implied that they get 'sent back to school' once they do, so one can infer that they might be rebuilt into a younger state physically as well - since apparently, people can grow old even in their android bodies.
Murai implied that deciding who relives or rebirths is a messy affair. Some people get to choose what happens to them (which means there's a way to communicate this after death), while others decide for them (the lawyers), and then some people just don't get a choice (the government regarding people with civic duties, like Code Readers/Lawyers, and on the flip side, criminals). Interesting you mentioned God as a machine, because that is most certainly an angle I'm planning to bump into in the future.

Work, Please! ~From World's Greatest Sweeper to the Far Future's Salaryman~

Chapter:11

Jul 13, 2022

To:Deleted User

Oh, I did misspell Shiyuri at the end. I dunno what I was up to back then, I might have actually lacked sleep. 😂 Either way, it's been corrected!
Shiyuri was very definitely a 'poisoned silver plate'. I was inspired by a storyline in an older anime where the main character's dream girl comes to meet him, but it was a deliberate ploy to attempt to get him into trouble. Props if anyone knows what this anime was, haha.

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Chapter:10

Jul 13, 2022

To:Deleted User

Thanks! I wanted to make this chapter have a more comical feel to it, since Shiyuri is an odd character which I'm planning to develop as we go along. A certain flavor to her character, per se. Too bad this girl's up to something, or Kuroiwa might have gotten some action 🤣

Work, Please! ~From World's Greatest Sweeper to the Far Future's Salaryman~

Chapter:9

Jul 13, 2022

To:Deleted User

Haha, that's quite difficult, though interesting angle to tackle. I'm trying to balance out the general lighter tone with the dystopian background and situation. But as for this 'dream girl', I'm sure you've read the succeeding chapters after this one, so yeah. 😉

Work, Please! ~From World's Greatest Sweeper to the Far Future's Salaryman~

Chapter:8

Jul 08, 2022

To:Deleted User

Murai sounding like he might go old Kuroiwa on some fools 😅

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Chapter:11

Jul 07, 2022

To:Playing_Koi

It makes me ecstatic reading such overwhelming praise. Thank you so much and happy you loved it! 😆

Work, Please! ~From World's Greatest Sweeper to the Far Future's Salaryman~

Chapter:0

Jul 06, 2022

To:Deleted User

Yeah, Shiyuri's pretty brutal indeed.
I wanted to start exploring other characters as well, so I'm glad you like it so far!

Work, Please! ~From World's Greatest Sweeper to the Far Future's Salaryman~

Chapter:10

Jun 25, 2022

To:Armorien

Thanks, happy you liked it so far!
The finger scene was definitely GitS inspired, nice that it reminded you of that series. 😀

Work, Please! ~From World's Greatest Sweeper to the Far Future's Salaryman~

Chapter:2

Jun 25, 2022

To:znf

You noticed, yeah! Definitely 😉

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Chapter:1

Jun 25, 2022

To:Deleted User

Thanks!
The more I worked on the novel, the more my idea of the kind of tone and stuff I wanted for the novel started to form, so I made a new Prologue to match it. Glad you liked it!

Work, Please! ~From World's Greatest Sweeper to the Far Future's Salaryman~

Chapter:0

Jun 25, 2022

To:Deleted User

For sure, there is seriously something wrong with these two girls 🤣

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Chapter:9

Jun 22, 2022

To:Deleted User

I think you can tell I enjoyed writing that part waaay too much 🤣

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Chapter:8

Jun 21, 2022

To:Dracors

Thanks! Glad you like it, hope you'll find the ride rad till the end~

Work, Please! ~From World's Greatest Sweeper to the Far Future's Salaryman~

Chapter:0

Jun 21, 2022

Not gonna lie, the interactions between Amy and her boss got me a few chuckles LOL

I love Amy already

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