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I wanna create fun stories with lots of themes! Meat! Meat! Meat!!
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Jun 02, 2022
I like this setup~
You got a knack for writing this action stuff 😀 I think if you can use more active language for future fight scenes, you'll really make it super rad.
Even the waifu rejects you, can't have stuff in Detroit Consider me interested
Jun 01, 2022
Yess, violent opening! Very cool.
Mar 29, 2022
This was really fun to read! Love the way you write.
Mar 17, 2022
To:Israeli Kaiser
Thanks for the comment! The protagonist is not that much of a silent type, though he does talk less. I don't usually write dialogue for him unless something is happening in the present or he's vividly recalling a memory. Thanks for noticing!
To:Deleted User
Thank you so much, that really means a lot! This is indeed my first published writing anywhere. My write-ups were mostly just between friends up to this point. 😅
Mar 16, 2022
Ohh, things are getting ominous 🤔
Mar 13, 2022
To:Bryce
Thanks for reading! Hope you enjoy the next one! 😀
