Jul 05, 2022
To:AWiddleStar
Thanks for the feedback!
I understand what you mean about the first two paragraphs. I will rework it in a way that is more eyecatching. 😁
The titles mentioned are popular (or once popular) anime/manga/light novel series (and what inspired me to steer more towards creative writing during my public education years). I think adding like a brief description of the titles could do it justice.
Thanks again for the feedback! I will make the changes! 😁