Jun 26, 2022
I enjoyed this chapter and the "Heart Disease" story arc. 😊
I will definitely continue reading. 😄
The things I like are the comedy and how the characters introduced all have something intriguing about them. I encourage you to continue to develop them more.
Things that could be improved...I think the start of the plot needs to happen at least within the first five or six chapters, though I also think that these first 5 chapters are setting up for the events to come.
Please correct me if I'm wrong. I don't have all the answers and giving my insight while also learning from others opinions and such. Not trying to call for an angry mob upon me or anything nor to sound not so knowledgeable. 😅