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Hi! I‘m Nika, nice to read ya! I like to write fantastical, cozy and hopeful stories. Currently focusing on novellas! Thank you for checking my stories out <3
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Sep 28, 2025
To:Moe Tie
Thank youuuu!
Thank you for the comment! Yes, this chapter was intended as sort of a 'time-lapse' as they're traveling to the castle so it's supposed to be speedy. But it's also the first time I've tried that
Sep 25, 2025
Great opening line and really nice voice throughout the whole chapter. I'm excited to read more! I just have no clue who Mrs. Hiyama is. She just... appears with the side glance, and is only mentioned twice after that, reacting to stuff. Maybe I'm too tired still, but I think giving her a bit more space in the chapter would lessen that confusion.
Sep 24, 2025
It's nice to see Janessa's magic. I really wonder what is going on with Luke, hopefully the next chapter will have some answers.
Uh oh... but honestly, Cassius should have mentioned this sooner!
The witches are super cute! I especially like their flower-names also, fun worldbuilding with the witches, witch-hunters etc.
Smiling is an important part of life! I try to keep it more on the light-hearted side, but it was important for me to show being trapped in a mechanical body isn't just cool. Also that Berus was a smile-y guy before all of this. Thanks for reading so far and commenting so often! I'm really happy about that.
Aaaah I'm glad you think so too! One of my fav details in the story 😆
I totally get that this felt rushed. I struggled with these few chapters tbh, on top of the feeling that I needed like 2-3 more rewrite cycles to properly iron things out overall. I guess that's just the nature of the contest, unfortunately (or at least, when it comes to my writing process...). But it's good to have your feedback, so when I edit I'll be extra careful to look at the pacing and give more room for the emotions to unfold! And yes with the leg that's just a plain mistake, oops. Thanks for pointing it out!
Haha yeah, I maybe should have made it a little more clear that Iuria is the most important thing in Phorok's life - much more than the two (not-so-anymore) strangers they lived the past few weeks with. I'll keep that in mind for any future editing, so thank you!
I'm glad to hear that! In the very first draft, Phorok was acutally female, but in the rewrite I thought it would be more fun to have him as a kind of father-figure foil to the king ☺️
To:obliviousbushtit
Yeeeeeesss it's more fun if there's struggle! The cool moments will come later 😀
A few moments away from the action were needed, I think :D I'm glad you liked it!
Sep 18, 2025
"Yeah, Edith isn't iconic at all" made me chuckle 😆
I can't believe Kevin actually did that. Great, intriguing first chapter, really! And Janessa is really cute ☺️