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Hi! I‘m Nika, nice to read ya! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ I like to write cute stories about magic, friendship and adventure! ( ✿ •̀ ‸ •́ ✿ )
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Apr 26, 2025
To:lolitroy
also wow Ellen Joe looks cool!!! I wish I could design characters like that
you discovered my secret plan... standalone with series potential...
Oooh, good point! Toma definitely had more of a character voice, I think. Now I just need to discover the secret recipe to get a whole crew of interesting characters together (though I think proper goals/agency is an important part of that).
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts! I think it's becoming more clear to me now that as a chronic underwriter, my characters suffer in the first draft (or rather, don't have any chance to be anything more than surface level because I don't give them enough page space to unfold). I think Nela benefitted most in this "restructuring" already and I hope that Leo shines a little more towards the end, but it's certainly something for me to keep in mind. I don't think I have it in me to do big edits like that for the remainder of this contest, but it's something I want to look out for in future stories/edits. Again, thank you for your comment! ☺️
Apr 25, 2025
To:obliviousbushtit
Aaaaaaah, thank you so much!! That means a lot to me :) Thank you so so much for reading and commenting!!
What a wonderful opening chapter. Great atmosphere!
Apr 21, 2025
To:Slow
Thank you so so so much for your comment! Thanks for reading all the way through, it means a lot to me. And I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Aaaaaahhh, it sounds like it worked! I'm glad to hear it - I'm not good with endings, but I really like this one. Thanks for reading and commenting!
I'm glad it worked!
She can be nice if she wants to be, haha
I get it - these chapters were the most painful to write and edit. Poor Leo. Thank you for your comment, Slow!
To:Shiro
Poor Leo :D but that's the price of style ☺️ thanks for reading and commenting, Shiro!
Oh noooo, that really sucks :( if you find the time, I'd love to hear your thoughts, no matter how long or short! Thanks for reading so far
Aaaaaahhh I'm glad to hear it! I'll also catch up with yours - looking forward to you finishing it!
To:SuperCoolNarutoGuy
I'm glad to hear it! :D
