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Hi! I‘m Nika, nice to read ya! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ I like to write cute stories about magic, friendship and adventure! ( ✿ •̀ ‸ •́ ✿ )
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Sep 24, 2025
Uh oh... but honestly, Cassius should have mentioned this sooner!
The witches are super cute! I especially like their flower-names also, fun worldbuilding with the witches, witch-hunters etc.
To:Moe Tie
Smiling is an important part of life! I try to keep it more on the light-hearted side, but it was important for me to show being trapped in a mechanical body isn't just cool. Also that Berus was a smile-y guy before all of this. Thanks for reading so far and commenting so often! I'm really happy about that.
Aaaah I'm glad you think so too! One of my fav details in the story 😆
I totally get that this felt rushed. I struggled with these few chapters tbh, on top of the feeling that I needed like 2-3 more rewrite cycles to properly iron things out overall. I guess that's just the nature of the contest, unfortunately (or at least, when it comes to my writing process...). But it's good to have your feedback, so when I edit I'll be extra careful to look at the pacing and give more room for the emotions to unfold! And yes with the leg that's just a plain mistake, oops. Thanks for pointing it out!
Haha yeah, I maybe should have made it a little more clear that Iuria is the most important thing in Phorok's life - much more than the two (not-so-anymore) strangers they lived the past few weeks with. I'll keep that in mind for any future editing, so thank you!
I'm glad to hear that! In the very first draft, Phorok was acutally female, but in the rewrite I thought it would be more fun to have him as a kind of father-figure foil to the king ☺️
To:obliviousbushtit
Yeeeeeesss it's more fun if there's struggle! The cool moments will come later 😀
A few moments away from the action were needed, I think :D I'm glad you liked it!
Sep 18, 2025
"Yeah, Edith isn't iconic at all" made me chuckle 😆
I can't believe Kevin actually did that. Great, intriguing first chapter, really! And Janessa is really cute ☺️
Sep 09, 2025
I thought it would be a little more exciting for him to recognize many things, but also be completely wrong with others - as a way to show that yes, this world is similar to the game, but unlike the game he knows, it's an organic thing that grows instead of being ideal for "the player". I hope that makes sense!
Exactly! And I think it works here with the smaller details with the, I guess I'd call it continuation?, but not so much with the goals. I'll have to find a balance with that, I guess. Thank you for your comment, as always!!
The group grows... ☺️
What good is a new body if you don't struggle with it? 😆