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Hi! I‘m Nika, nice to read ya! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ I like to write cute stories about magic, friendship and adventure! ( ✿ •̀ ‸ •́ ✿ )
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Oct 25, 2024
The story gets more and more intriguing. I really like the interactions between Dorian and his mom, and also with Avery. You really manage to paint a clear picture with them!
Great start - I really like the way your sentences flow, how the worldbuilding and the connections between the people are woven into the story. It really is a joy to read!
To:otkrlj
Thank you for reading! I hope I can keep the comfy vibes strong throughout this little story.
To:Stubby1807
Thank you! I'm happy these things are coming through in my writing.
To:Mech
I'm happy to hear the chapter was comfy for you. That's really the highest compliment I could receive on this piece, so thank you! :)
Oct 23, 2024
A really nice start. A lot of info here, but you manage to package it in an engaging way. Can't wait to learn more about Kaori and read the next chapter :)
Archie is a great addition to the story, I like their interactions :D
I really like the way you write Jiro, and the surreal-dreamy atmosphere you've created. A digital afterlife sounds pretty scary to me, so I'm interested to see where you're going with this idea! It's definitely intriguing.
Thank you for your kind words! Something I really like about the Honeyfeed Contests is that they get me out of my writing comfort zone. I've been wanting to write a cozy story for ages, but never found the time, so I'm excited to see how this one pans out.
To:Shulox
Aaaah, thank you for reading! I'm also glad to see you again, good luck with your entry! I have Anima on top of my reading list, and hope to start it soon :D
To:Kitsune
Thank you for reading and commenting! That's exactly the question that's supposed to be at the heart of the story, and I hope that I'll be able to find one answer with Toma.
Oct 11, 2023
To:lolitroy
Thank you! It's also my favorite line I've written in this piece :)
To:znf
Thank you so much for reading and leaving such an in-depth reply!
To:chibiandreea
Thank you for reading and leaving such a nice comment! I hadn't noticed the status, I'll change it asap.
Oct 10, 2023
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Introducing Apatheia is my attempt at "expanding" the world of Into the Night / An Invitation from Thanatos, and I just hope that is in line with the prompt. But nevertheless, I really enjoyed writing this piece and reading the contest entries!