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Jul 04, 2023
To:Syed Al Wasee
Yup! great catch
To:minatika
Haha i just named him with the first thing pop up in my head when I wrote 'snake' lol xD
Jun 29, 2023
Yap! that's the Kai 🤣
Jun 27, 2023
To:SkeletonIdiot
Thanks for your impression! means a lot
Jun 25, 2023
looks interesting! I like how you write in such a casual style like we were chatting. Perhaps I'll try it to enhance my immersive approach in my next writing!
True! that's one of the bottom lines of what I want to show in this story, is that while Elias may approach the challenges in his 'adult-general-like' way, ultimately, high school is a period of exploration and self-discovery for people around him. glad I have a cool reader!
it's happening!
Jun 23, 2023
To:Shulox
Wow! Such high praise coming from a contributor like you. I hope I have the time to read the great works you have written, as well as those of other contributors. I'm thrilled if you stick with the continuation of the story. Thank you!
Thank you! I was hesitant because I've never written with this theme before, but in the end, it was enjoyable to see your story finding its readers. I hope you like it!
Jun 20, 2023
Your writing style is truly captivating! I can see that you employ a unique method for this series. It reminds me of Dune, where there are historical notes about upcoming events at the beginning of each chapter. I can feel your vision and dedication to this work. I do have a small suggestion, though, which I was reminded of before. As web novels often have a limited word count that readers can easily digest, it's important to focus on the key points you want to convey in each chapter and carefully select scenes that hold direct or substance meaning for the overall story, without excessive or repeated exposition. Nonetheless, it was a delightful read!
Certainly will do! I hope our similarity goes beyond our shared love for side characters. It seems like you've reached a level that I haven't yet achieved, and I hope I can catch up with you soon! I want to contribute more actively to other people's writing. Hopefully, I can find more time to dedicate to it. Thank you for reading!
Jun 18, 2023
well i hope the next chapter won't make you disappointed 😅
Jun 15, 2023
Your words must have truly motivated many writers to write. Thank you!
Jun 08, 2023
To:AvighnAnime
figures! thought will be fine since i need this exposition for the prologue... I'll try to shorten it in the main ones! thanks for reading anyway
Jun 06, 2023
hey thanks for pointing out! and thanks for reading!