Jun 20, 2023
Your writing style is truly captivating! I can see that you employ a unique method for this series. It reminds me of Dune, where there are historical notes about upcoming events at the beginning of each chapter. I can feel your vision and dedication to this work. I do have a small suggestion, though, which I was reminded of before. As web novels often have a limited word count that readers can easily digest, it's important to focus on the key points you want to convey in each chapter and carefully select scenes that hold direct or substance meaning for the overall story, without excessive or repeated exposition. Nonetheless, it was a delightful read!