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21, Voice Actress, American. Perpetually residing in a hell of my own creation. You can reach me on Discord @Vforest.
My acting work can be found on the home button. Paperback copies of Yesterhead are available for purchase on Amazon.
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Sep 11, 2022
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Thanks for the support, hope you enjoy it!
It do be alive rn
Aug 26, 2022
I really enjoyed reading this first chapter, I found the protagonist very endearing and the story overall just felt genuine. Even though the setup is relatively normal, it’s delivered in a way that comes across as real and honest. For example, while less-than-accepting patents or a bully like Gary could be found in plenty of stories, the thought process our main character quickly falls into of, “Well, if everyone hates me, why should I be here?” hits incredibly hard as something very true to life and the exact words used as they think about it are kind of devastating with how nonchalant it’s thought over. Also, Cuddles is great. Can’t wait to read more!
Aug 14, 2022
This is really neat. I adore the idea of setting a cyberpunk story like this (or at least the start of it) in a high school to the point where if not for all the near-future transhumanist concepts at play it would be like some ordinary slice-of-life school drama. The narration by the protagonist is especially interesting, as it goes to show how simmilar the internal monologues of a badass cyber-noir antihero and a loner highschooler character really are, blurring the lines between the two. And again, the world building is great- while this first chapter was a good bit to take in all at once, I feel like I got a pretty good understanding of everything without even needing to read too much into it. It’s a tad lengthy, but that’s more my taste than anything else. I imagine I’ll keep reading this to see where it all goes.
