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21, shut-in, American. Perpetually residing in a hell of my own creation. You can reach me on Discord @Vforest.
I do voice acting now! Link’s on the home button.
Paperback copies of Yesterhead are available for purchase on Amazon.
What is an Achievement?
Jan 22, 2023
I thought surely a scene like this was coming at some point, and it did not disappoint.
Jan 21, 2023
To:Dracors
Never trust authority. Unless they’re funny, then you can trust them a little
Jan 17, 2023
Making the mother of all omelettes here, Frankie- can’t fret over every egg!
To:WALKER
Excellent, I do hope it delivers.
Jan 12, 2023
To:ItsYaBoiYungIan
Thanks! Characters are my favorite part of writing.
My god. I don’t know if I would’ve ever noticed that about the start of my sentences in a million years, so thanks. Enjoy reading!
Great to hear from you again! I hope I can encourage you to write more of your own story, I can definitely relate to that feeling where you just get stuck on something you’re writing. Honestly I recommend just thinking about the story a lot as if it were something someone else was making and trying to come up with what you’d WANT to happen next, or just what you’d have fun writing next. Keep yourself interested by listening to your instincts and keep moving forward no matter what, even if it feels like you’re making mistakes along the way. Sometimes those mistakes can lead to places more interesting than you could’ve thought up on your own.
I won’t spoil you on what the bear ends up being but I’ll say it’s a tad more than just a bubi for him. Next chapter’s the resolution basically, and even then it’s super short so I just wanna thank you again for reading through the pretty much the entirety of my first story. Having readers like you is what motivates me. I’ve written a lot since this novel ended, and plan to keep doing so. I’ll hope you’ll keep on writing too.
Jan 10, 2023
To:Elukard
No, not at all, just providing critique. I’ll see for myself wherever this leads.
I feel like too much is being explained right away? Like I could wind up wrong, but you could build more intrigue by leaving out some of these details about their plans for us to discover later on, and the story would go faster that way too without needing to stop and diluvge all this info.
Hell yeah, why not? I’ll start checking out your work today.
Jan 08, 2023
I imagine they’re pretty huge. For Mr. Parker, paying a few ripped humans is easier than hiring all the people to take care of and clean up after a bunch of large animals in the park.
Jan 04, 2023
Unfortunately for them, the moon’s not that much better.
Dec 29, 2022
To:cube
Have confidence!!
This is an excellent depiction of a self-isolating personality. Tomio quite obviously doesn’t quite care to be where he is right now, and his great hesitance to express himself in any way is not only evidence of that but also the final nail in the coffin for him. He’s hardly living the way he goes through life at this point, and the only companionship he finds is through trying to see his absent self through others, slowly realizing what he’s doing wrong. Positively excellent portrayal
The narration in this is great. Their addressing of the reader is pretty fun on it’s own, but it’s more their personality/tone that really sells it. Good stuff
