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Jan 08, 2026

Great ending! I like that the narration moved outwards, allowing us to see in through Yui and Koga's eyes. Really well done!

Take Two: Us

Chapter:48

Jan 05, 2026

Ahh man, I'm all caught up. First I wanna say how much I've enjoyed this story. The character's are so fleshed out and I really enjoy sharing in their emotions, which is very easy to do because you write so well. Sorry I didn't like each individual chapter, I read the first one long while back, and then the other day I started binging. Haha maybe that's why consistent readers don't always comment or like each chapter as they go, I was in the zone so after a while and before I knew it, I felt it'd be a little odd to spam like the ones I already passed. Anyways, great job! I'm excited to see their romance to it's conclusion. I'll spam like and leave a review when it's done

Take Two: Us

Chapter:44

Dec 10, 2025

To:Orionless

I hope you have something cooking as well, it kills me that I've read all that you've posted on this site. I need some more!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:46

Dec 03, 2025

To:Orionless

Holy crap, welcome back!!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:46

Aug 23, 2025

In my gallery there is a picture that I drew of Tani and Shirai together in this chapter. Be sure to check it out!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:42

Aug 19, 2025

Love the Garry Kasparov reference. Small thing though, first line reads, "How in Kasparov's name did become friend's with a creature like that?" Just missing the 'you' in there.

All in all great chapter!

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:4

Aug 16, 2025

Haha damn idk how these two beasts are going to fall in love. If or whenever it gets to the point they become nice to each other will be a real shock to the senses

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:2

Aug 15, 2025

To:Kirb

I feel like I just learned where a colloquial expression originated haha. I'll definitely keep reading

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:1

Aug 15, 2025

As a big fan of chess and smart MCs, I was drawn in by both. But what really got me right away was how close the term "who shat in your cereal?" is to a term I use irl. Though I say, "don't shit in my cheerios" or "I'll shit in your cheerios"

Anyways, really good chapter I like the foil she's going to play to his desire to be alone already

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:1

Aug 10, 2025

To:Orionless

Haha I wish it hasn't taken me years to get to this point in the story 😭 I actually just went back and cleaned it up a little cause I kind of hurriedly posted it. Anyways, I think you might be right about the Languages Club doing okay. But going forward Tani is gonna have a few more pressing obstacles to overcome during the festival that have nothing to do with the booth!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:39

Aug 08, 2025

"If that's what you want, then... just leave me here to die,"

Is so damn sad I felt that

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:31

Aug 07, 2025

To:Orionless

Haha no I swear!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:38

Aug 06, 2025

To:Orionless

I'm glad you enjoyed it, I was worried about this one haha. And yeah most definitely Shirai would have let him! She'll be getting her own chapter coming up soon, I'm really excited to get to that. Poor Ume indeed though, but maybe she's reading it wrong? If you had to choose between telling your crush if you were nervous about something or telling your friend, who would it be? Better yet, if you were about to throw up in a car, would you choose to puke over your crush or your friend? 🤔

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:38

Aug 06, 2025

To:Orionless

Haha I enjoy the word vomit keep it coming!! Thank you for reading, Orionless!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:38

Aug 01, 2025

To:Orionless

Sorry for the delay! Life has been particularly crazy this July. Hope you enjoy!

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:38

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