Aug 23, 2022
To:Steward McOy
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I wouldn't doubt there is some awkward language in places, as I wrote this novel with a emphasis on how I felt in the moment. Being a bit unpredictable was my aim as well.
I'm not familiar with the piece that you referenced, but it did kind of start off as a revenge story in mind. But despite the circumstances and intentions that Caramello had at first, he did come to appreciate Chiffon to the point where he doubted himself. Even a road paved with bad intentions can result in a positive outcome, because it ended up being what Chiffon could make of it.
Good luck to you too! I'm still making my way through yours, albeit a bit slowly due to work. And don't worry about that verbal slip. I didn't read it that way at all.