Jun 19, 2022
To:Saito Forester
Yep, it certainly is a pretty weird building layout, right?
Also, I was trying to make the situation seem more intense I suppose, but I do see how that would throw a reader off, especially since I only now noticed I used it quite frequently this chapter thanks to you!
Anyway, thank you for pointing it out! I shall endeavor to become ever better 😤