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Short story guy forced to write long ones.

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Jun 29, 2023

Wait so is he still in middle school or was there a large time-skip after that whole touch of a girl incident?
Either way, at least he's isn't that far-gone yet regarding his thoughts and opinions lol. Having my hopes that he could improve himself. 🙏

Hanako won’t Grant my Wish!

Chapter:1

Jun 29, 2023

I certainly haven't seen this type of narration on this site before lol. But it worked really well in capturing my interest for the romance so good job!

Hanako won’t Grant my Wish!

Chapter:0

Jun 29, 2023

Well if there's a cute little gangster in the streets i'd say he'll have quite a reputation lol. He's bound to be known by most.

Pretty Boy Gangster

Chapter:2

Jun 29, 2023

Goddamn what a chaotic first chapter lol. I could still tell what's going on and what were the characters introduced like though so great job on organizing this!

Pretty Boy Gangster

Chapter:1

Jun 29, 2023

The fact that novel's in english but they were supposed to be speaking japanese never fails to make me laugh lmao. Kinda like that one scene in jojo part 5.

Cursed Lines

Chapter:3

Jun 29, 2023

Thank god he said he just wanted to be Alice's friend lol.

Cursed Lines

Chapter:2

Jun 29, 2023

I couldn't help but think of Tsukihime reading this lol

Cursed Lines

Chapter:1

Jun 28, 2023

It's nice that the story's progressing after those sol chapters. Though, it would have been nicer if they tied in with this one more. Like maybe make Yuta's perverted gaze more conspicuous when he's around Mina. And make Mina more aware of this, perhaps foreshadowing it more in her dialogue. Because this felt a bit too sudden.
For the positives, the dialogue made me pretty emotional. Especially Yuta's atonement, really made me love the characters and their chemistry more.

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:7

Jun 28, 2023

Guess it's time to put those athlete legs to work lol.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:13

Jun 28, 2023

I mean I don't think sending a picture of your drenched upper half to a male person you've just met is considered normal as well lmao. Keith's such a fun guy to read.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:11

Jun 28, 2023

Just imagining a 6'6 college student shrieking over a girl texting him is so funny lol.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:10

Jun 27, 2023

At this point i just think every says "lol" outside now. Lol.

Heartstrings and Horns

Chapter:4

Jun 27, 2023

Bro probably watched Code Geass or smth lol.

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:6

Jun 27, 2023

Loving yourself more than a real girl. Nice

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:5

Jun 27, 2023

I gotta say, you nailed the mood for this one. There's always that scene in seinen romance that has the two characters smoking and this brought me back to it lol.
I also like the slowburn and that we're getting to know carmine and sofia more, bit by bit. A lot of novels on this site is either too fast or doesn't get to the point, this one's however hits the perfect middle. Keep it up!

McMami

Chapter:5

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