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Short story guy forced to write long ones.
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Jun 12, 2023
To:Christian Widjaya
Alright, I'll try to put more personality into the monologue and split it up as nice as possible. Thanks for the tip. 😸
That's a very nice advice, thanks. My English teacher usually tells me the same actually lol.
The word choice seems a bit off here and there but the metaphor Raku used was on point and very emotion, nice first chapter 😸
Imagine jumping in joy one second only to be put in reserve the next. I feel bad for Alex too :/
To:StorMiX451
Lol, I'd be the same If I were you.
Jun 11, 2023
"Age is just a number" "And jail is just a room." Nice one 💀💀
Sensing a bit of Makima vibes from Kiyoko lol. I also like the mysterious way you describe the room alot, keep it up 😸
Jun 19, 2022
Hopefully this chapter doesn’t come out as self-degrading or edgy, i tried to make it not.