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TSpasov

I'm just a guy who loves reading and creating stories. That's all I think about actually. Anyways, I hope I can create something everyone enjoys. Peace...

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Sep 05, 2022

To:Cora

Lmao you too! Blood on the dance floor is also a good one

Machine Heart

Chapter:8

Sep 04, 2022

Judging by your titles, I see you are man of culture as well 😂

Machine Heart

Chapter:8

Sep 04, 2022

I feel like the story is starting to pick up the pase. I honestly like it because it reminds of Detroit: Become Human in a way, which is one of my favorite games. I will keep reading further.

Machine Heart

Chapter:6

Aug 28, 2022

To:Cora

Thank you that's very kind!
Once the contest is over I will make a second part of the story.

Machine Heart

Chapter:1

Aug 28, 2022

To:Cora

Sure! I will read them when I can! Meanwhile, If you have the time and if you want, you can check out my novel as well and give me your opinion on it. I'm new to writing so I take any critique I can. :)

Machine Heart

Chapter:1

Aug 27, 2022

To:Sawa/Varon

I will keep reading it because I think it's very interesting. But if you have the time and you want to, I'd like to hear your opinion on my novel, I'm new as well so I take any critique I can get.

(BACK!) Project: INFERNO

Chapter:1

Aug 27, 2022

So you requested a critique on Discord and here I am delivering it to you! I hope you don't get offended, this is just a friendly advice.

1. One of the rules of the contest is that the novel must contain at least 25k words and your novel only contains 20k, so what you need to do is made it a bit longer and you will be fine.

2. The world building is great, it's a classic cyberpunk world, but it works!

I know this is just the second chapter, but I believe the first impression is super important. I'm going to read a bit more and I will let you know what I think. :)

Machine Heart

Chapter:1

Aug 27, 2022

Now that I've read the first two chapters I want to give my opinion and a friendly critique. I hope you don't take them personally, I know it probably gets better as it goes, but I think the first impression is very important.

1. There's no character description, the reader couldn't imagine the story if he doesn't know how the characters look.

2. It's a little rushed, the story happens way too quickly, some people may like this though.

3. Everyone just likes Sawano because he is the main character and he defeated the girl, he didn't do anything to earn their respect.

4. And I just wanna point out the grammar, I know you warned us about them.

However, the story looks good and long, which is important. Keep up the good work, I'm sorry if I offended you!

(BACK!) Project: INFERNO

Chapter:1

Aug 13, 2022

That's an interesting start. I also really like your cover art.

Red-Black Course

Chapter:1

Aug 13, 2022

To:Koyomi

Alright, thanks man!

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:1

Aug 13, 2022

To the author... Hey, dude! I was just wondering, how do you promote your novel? Because I've been struggling to get recognition for a while.

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:1

Aug 07, 2022

Thanks! By the way if I'm being honest, when I first saw your novel I thought you were writing for the MAL x Honeyfeed contest.

Royal Princess of Blood

Chapter:20

Aug 07, 2022

To:Tearing Sanctuary

Ohh so you already have it finished in other sites? If you want, you can tell me where and I can go read it?

Royal Princess of Blood

Chapter:20

Aug 07, 2022

You are doing an amazing job! So far I really enjoyed this novel and it's better than most isekais here on Honeyfeed. The only correction I have is that the story is moving a bit slowly and maybe you need to speed it up a little. Other than that it's pretty good. :)

Royal Princess of Blood

Chapter:20

Jul 21, 2022

To:Yuumei

Is your novel finished or are you still posting new chapters?

The Immortal Witch's Death Wish

Chapter:4

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