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P.S: I usually read back as a courtesy but if you're gonna read JUST so I return the favor, heed my warning: I won't.

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Oct 15, 2023

I've noticed that you explain subtext sometimes, like this chapter where he's jealous so he goes for drinks to escape the situation, which I know because he just said so, but then... you repeated both things?
give some credit to us readers smh
I know, there's no need to state things multiple times with inner monologue, narration and actions within the same 200 words or so

Fading Scars

Chapter:22

Oct 14, 2023

To:Naru_Sheny

I mean that everyone acts so outlandish that I'm left wondering if it's something like, idk, tengen toppa where ppl roll around screaming their feelings rather than something like eva where they act like actual people

Fantasia Is NOT Ugly!

Chapter:10

Oct 14, 2023

To:Naru_Sheny

I just figured that's how she qualified or smth
then I read the next chapter

Fantasia Is NOT Ugly!

Chapter:11

Oct 13, 2023

I guess they believed when she said she wants world peace

Fantasia Is NOT Ugly!

Chapter:11

Oct 13, 2023

the humor was pretty nice this chapter and I found myself liking their interactions, but near the end it got cartoony again, and I'm still not sure if that's a stylistic/narrative choice or if it's supposed to be realistic
idk
it's entertaining to far though

Fantasia Is NOT Ugly!

Chapter:10

Oct 13, 2023

*fedora tips*

Fantasia Is NOT Ugly!

Chapter:7

Oct 13, 2023

0_o
I'm just going to assume this is one of those elevated reality stories where no one acts like a person

Fantasia Is NOT Ugly!

Chapter:4

Oct 13, 2023

ah shit, not like other girls

Fantasia Is NOT Ugly!

Chapter:3

Oct 13, 2023

o_o
that was chilling from start to finish, well done

Do ya really not wanna die?

Chapter:1

Oct 13, 2023

the idea that whether we live or die depends on a game done by deities borders on existential horror :| lots of questions to be asked, too
do people reclaimed by death go to... idk, the underworld or smth
do people reclaimed by life stay alive for a wee bit longer? since in the end they probably end up going to the underworld anyway
what's up with gods being replaced
idk it's early and I'm sleep deprived and having an existential crisis now

A Rigged Game

Chapter:1

Oct 11, 2023

The Rival

Fading Scars

Chapter:19

Oct 11, 2023

ok but is it BL

The Gifts of Life

Chapter:1

Oct 11, 2023

she always seems to be ruled by thanatos, one of the two forces

Kiss the Water

Chapter:1

Oct 11, 2023

despair is for losers I agree

in all seriousness, though, I really liked it c: there's so much 'once upon a time were two people and they died' in this competition that to see something directly defy death/fate/whatever was... well, hopeful

Like the universe

Chapter:1

Oct 11, 2023

To:ReadKey

okok, that makes a lot of sense

Contagious Psyche

Chapter:1

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