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lolitroy

I usually read back as a courtesy but if you're gonna read JUST so I return the favor, heed my warning: I won't.

apparently my writing style is too avant-garde for the weebs or some shit but if you ask me that's just a polite way to tell me I have terminal skill issue

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Mar 22, 2026

To:Mara

I agree,,,

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:18

Mar 21, 2026

To:Mara

this feels like a veiled roast wtf

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:10

Mar 18, 2026

To:Marvelous

it is very bad
ideas are the easy part of writing and ai will always make your work samey and trashy
even if the prose is not great it's better if YOU actually do it

Darren's Quest

Chapter:1

Mar 18, 2026

the concept looks cool but this reeks of ai
it is what it is

Darren's Quest

Chapter:1

Mar 17, 2026

I still think you got the schizo aspect done well, but I'm also beginning to think it's at the cost of, for lack of a better term, being enjoyable to read
maybe it's because of the idea that it's not a "real" experience even if it approximates one, but at some point it's begun to get tiring to read. it's weird because I've read a way too many journals of this ilk by people with the actual conditions and it's usually interesting if nothing else. Piecing together what's actually going on can be interesting, but there are several instances where I just have no idea wtf I'm reading and while I GET it's the point, that doesn't make it fun you get me
it also honestly reads like a journal more than actual psy horror tbh. some parts are so goofy that I can't tell if they're meant to be funny. I think so? That's fine and levity in horror is based, but again, there's a few too many instances so it feels more tonally confused than anything else. In a vacuum this could be fun, but for a psy horror light novel... hmmmm...

I Wanna Tell You About My Schizo Friends But I'm Not Sure They'll Let Me

Chapter:9

Mar 17, 2026

conservatives were right except instead of making the frogs gay they just made women crazy

Echoes

Chapter:6

Mar 17, 2026

nvm no toilet water was involved

Becoming Erica Skye

Chapter:1

Mar 17, 2026

there's a BL that starts exactly like this except it's the cousin

Becoming Erica Skye

Chapter:0

Mar 17, 2026

To:Adnan-The-One

the text explicitly says twenty two I'm confused