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lolitroy

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P.S: I usually read back as a courtesy but if you're gonna read JUST so I return the favor, heed my warning: I won't.

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Aug 17, 2023

that cafe reminds me of this (allegedly) mafia-run coffee shop chain that threatened starbucks out of the country
they have shops everywhere, especially next to government buildings
there's one right next to one of the most dangerous areas of the city

coffee is not to be messed around

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:13

Aug 17, 2023

nobody wants to let me steal flowers for lyney so I'm gonna read and review bomb this this out of spite

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:11

Aug 16, 2023

To:kazesenken

let's pretend he did

technicolor spiral

Chapter:10

Aug 16, 2023

YES GENTA
AS IF I COULDN'T LOVE HIM ANYMORE

RYO AND REN MY BOYYYSSS

Bonded by Music

Chapter:39

Aug 16, 2023

it says a lot about your ability as a writer so make me care so much for a nicotine addict I've known for less than 5k words
like my first thought when starting this was WHERE THE FUCK IS REN
IS THIS MAN REALLY GONNA LOSE HIS BEST FRIEND AND WIFE WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOu in no particular order

Telling the Bees

Chapter:3

Aug 16, 2023

did they just einstein-rosen bridge themselves to beeland
wtf
that's a new one

Telling the Bees

Chapter:2

Aug 15, 2023

To:strawberrymilk

makes sense
so long as it's at least alluded to at some point it's fine I suppose

Fading Scars

Chapter:10

Aug 15, 2023

I was confused during the first half of the chapter ngl
had no idea who was saying what
whose nails¿ whose mom what is going on¿

but the second half was fine

Fading Scars

Chapter:11

Aug 15, 2023

To:strawberrymilk

no problem
I'm reading it rn and it's fun to far c: their interactions are adorable
thank you for writing :D

Fading Scars

Chapter:7

Aug 15, 2023

'it's almost like you don't know how to be happy'
OKAY? KEN?? HAVE SOME TACT?? I lol'd

their relationship is honestly very cute
my one gripe ig is that ken just kinda randomly liked her out of nowhere
he's so sweet to her that it makes sense that she'll like him back, but he legit just woke up one day and chose violence
it'd be nice to see a bit more behind that train of thought in particular

Fading Scars

Chapter:10

Aug 15, 2023

cute

Fading Scars

Chapter:9

Aug 15, 2023

a way to a girl's heart is through her stomach

Fading Scars

Chapter:8

Aug 15, 2023

the conversation about food was cute, pretty nice indirect characterization
sometimes it's hard to know who's saying what because neither has a particualrly distinct speech pattern and there's little dialogue tags tho

Fading Scars

Chapter:7

Aug 15, 2023

well, that was fast

Fading Scars

Chapter:5

Aug 15, 2023

omg look it's a honeyverse reference rofl lmao lol

anyway grace best girl that is my review
bye

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:42

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