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lolitroy

I usually read back as a courtesy but if you're gonna read JUST so I return the favor, heed my warning: I won't.

apparently my writing style is too avant-garde for the weebs or some shit but if you ask me that's just a polite way to tell me I have terminal skill issue

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Jan 03, 2026

this is the third time someone's breasts get described
is there something ur not telling us amako.............

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Kingdoms of Sin: The Hero Is Dead

Chapter:23

Jan 03, 2026

"pretend you're doing something unholy to me! I'll do anything in exchange!"

God damn woman keep it in your pants

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Kingdoms of Sin: The Hero Is Dead

Chapter:22

Jan 03, 2026

I was going to make another phallic chapter joke but that ending,,,,

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Chapter:21

Jan 03, 2026

WHERE IS THE SCENE WITH TYFFEON BARKING WHEN HE SEES AMAKO'S SLUTTY OUTFIT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER

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Kingdoms of Sin: The Hero Is Dead

Chapter:20

Jan 03, 2026

horsewoman... what are her three-

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Kingdoms of Sin: The Hero Is Dead

Chapter:19

Jan 03, 2026

the first third of this chapter was incredibly phallic and I feel uncomfortable

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Chapter:18

Jan 03, 2026

you turned kit into a furry huh
what are her three sizes

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Chapter:16

Jan 03, 2026

them: this might not work
her: yea
them: SHUT UP

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Chapter:15

Jan 03, 2026

fuck I caught up

✨Naomi✨wanted to be nonconsensually squished
why is this a trend with all your heroines

on another note, if terminally online people can guess someone's location based on their eye reflection, isn't this basically inviting people to swarm Riku's house?

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Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:11

Jan 03, 2026

idk this might be me avoiding social media but I feel like if I saw this shitshow happening irl I'd be on the 'stop harassing teen boys for attention' club, but I digress

With that said, I finally found something to nitpick, which is the a-a-a-anime stuttering. READ THAT OUT LOUD. NOBODY STUTTERS LIKE THAT.

Anyway, kool story. I think you hit the sweet spot of "unlikable" yet interesting characters. Lena's personality and flaws were so strong that they ironically ended up dragging the story along with her (at least for me), but I think you kind of nailed it with the twinkfic. Naomi ✨ feels like the natural evolution of this. I think Riku is fine so far, but your female lead continues the trend of eclipsing the story. I don't even mean it in a bad way. They just have such strong presences that... well, other elements might fall back as a result. This doesn't even apply for protagonists only. Already Hana and the ✨Kagayaki parent ✨ are battling for the spotlight.

The two leads also have actual chemistry despite their unhinged interactions. I have a love hate relationship with the way you format plot/structure, but I think it specifically works in this story's favor. With that said, while I'd say that so far it's your best based on this first few chapter, weirdly, I feel like it hasn't reached the highs (or the lows) of past works. I feel like I can say the same for a lot of people here whose work has improved, at least to me.

Oh yeah, I'll say this to sabotage competition: I feel like your stories have a strong middle, but kind of wobble near the climax, part of it being the prose/structure, so if you haven't written/edited that yet I'd advise you to watch out for that. If I had to bitch about something, I'd say that Riku is kind of being a pushover despite his attempt to be edgy BUT I also feel like that's gonna change very soon.

Hana best girl.

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Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:10

Jan 03, 2026

the fuck is this gpt trash
why is she using em dashes in dialogue

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Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:8

Jan 03, 2026

To:obliviousbushtit

you have, like kagayaki, fallen into the machine
you are naught but corpo vomit
may you escape the claws of capitalism before the kirakira is gone... forever...

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Chapter:7

Jan 03, 2026

of fucking course the chuuni is an M

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Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:6

Jan 03, 2026

agree with armorien, it kinda feels out of nowhere
if there's something spotlight romances are confirming for me it's that fame sucks balls and I'm glad I get to wear pants upside down in peace

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Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:5

Jan 03, 2026

i piss here to mark my territory

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Chapter:1