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I usually read back as a courtesy but if you're gonna read JUST so I return the favor, heed my warning: I won't.

apparently my writing style is too avant-garde for the weebs or some shit but if you ask me that's just a polite way to tell me I have terminal skill issue

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Jan 02, 2026

I know exactly the types of fans an idol who makes a wheelchair bound girl kneel would attract...

Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:4

Jan 02, 2026

To:Moon

NO
SHUT UP
I HADN'T THOUGHT ABOUT THAT GDI

The Day "Ms. Perfect" Snapped and Tricked the Manga Club Into Going to Another World as Supporting Characters for her Chosen One Antics

Chapter:16

Jan 02, 2026

Something I like about your stories is how genuinely different each protagonist is. It looks like this contest's flavor is no thoughts head empty... makes me wonder how Lena would fare

Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:3

Jan 02, 2026

BARK BARK GRRRRRRR EYES GLOW RED

Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:2

Jan 02, 2026

To:obliviousbushtit

we meet yet again my nemesis
i refuse to be intimidated by u i REFUSE

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:1

Jan 02, 2026

Up until this point, I was thinking that my main grip with this story is that both leads are kind of "too good". The first chapter was pretty interesting, but once the setting/time changes, it almost feels like a bait and switch.

Aika has been alright for the most part, but she feels like nice girl + trauma and that's pretty much it. Liking cats feels like the most "this character is kind" trope in anime so it's basically white noise to me. Her trauma responses are refreshingly realistic. I do like that she's abrasive without being hostile, but as a reader I can tell that it's 100% a defense mechanism rather than a pErSoNaLiTy QuIrK or whatever. Her preemptively setting herself up for disappointment and unknowingly self-sabotaging hits hard. Quite honestly I hadn't heard of giving cats crumbs, but I'll chalk that up to anime magic. I'd assume giving them protein-based leftovers would probably yield better results, but alas.

The big BIG issue is that Caleb is way too good at everything. I get the appeal of the character and I get that this is common in this kind of genre, but usually authors add SOME spice you know. He's good at singing, good-looking, fit, likes animals and animals like him, kind, empathetic... like come on. No joke, it almost feels like God deployed him specifically to cure Aika's trauma and be the perfect malewife bf. Maybe he's... shy? Or a pushover...? But come ON. Try switching the genders around and see if you see what I mean.

Called To You

Chapter:9

Jan 02, 2026

can you make it any more obvious that this was written by a woman
asking in the most racist way possible

Called To You

Chapter:6

Jan 02, 2026

it's ok aika it's called being horny

Called To You

Chapter:3

Jan 02, 2026

it's ok caleb it's called being horny

Called To You

Chapter:2

Jan 02, 2026

this isnt kawaii... wheres my cute shoujo romcom...

Called To You

Chapter:0

Jan 02, 2026

it wasn't x. it was y.

Color Me Yours

Chapter:1

Jan 02, 2026

man there's so many names, everyone talks the same, and there are so many uninterrupted bits of dialogue with 0 tags so I can't tell who's talking. The white room syndrome doesn't help

The Light I Wanted To Reach That Day

Chapter:10

Jan 02, 2026

small world huh

The Light I Wanted To Reach That Day

Chapter:8

Jan 02, 2026

there are so many things and so many characters introduced at once aaa

The Light I Wanted To Reach That Day

Chapter:6

Jan 02, 2026

THE CHARACTER GOING BALD IS AN ACTUAL PLOT POINT I CANT BREAHE

Limelight Blight

Chapter:22

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