Jul 28, 2026
To:Mara
tbh yeahh I agree, I'm experimenting with this one. I was thinking of deleting this yesterday and I don't think it's because I dislike it, but I guess I'm not as invested as other stories I think aren't as "good" like the is*kai or the BL but which I'm really fond of regardless. The same happened with b*rdfic which people kept shilling while I was meh about it, and shitshells which made finals so lol lmao
I did intend to show Pebble's motivation before (and/or she just says it a few times), but I get why drip feeding doesn't work as well in a faster paced story, so I'll see how I can fix that...
ty for critim
much appreciated as usual