Jun 08, 2026
To:Moon
no I did laugh, I just didn't enjoy it as much as your other fics because I feel like it lacked the emotional core your other fics have, even a scent of seduction which was also a comedy. I think that for romcom purposes it was p nice but yk,,,, I don't even actually know why luphor likes amarilla. Like I saw all their convoa but it was mostly her rizzing him and being horny while he was like nu uh and then seemed to randomly do a 180. I got p invested bc I misread and thought the killing thing was part of the tragic backstory and that l*phor had forcibly been evilized long term but then was like a nvm and then the final boss was just some bum so the finale could happen idk. I think aurorafic kinda fell into this, but for some reason it kinda fic the story while this just felt like there should've/could've been more but instead we got that ending because stories have to end and l*phor reciprocated amarilla's feelings bc romance tag. Like objectively speaking there's nothing WRONG with it I feel, but it wasn't as strong a pairing as your other fics, or maybe Ama(rilla... ako... :hfshock:) x Tyffeon and Aurora x Marigold just raised the bar too much idk. I just think it was too much emphasis on the com, but I can see why other people enjoyed it so much. If I hadn't read anything else from you I probably would've had a better time but I just kept waiting for That Scene ur other fics have and there just wasn't. The father flashback was by far my favorite passage in the entire story and I wish the whole thing had been like that, but then it wouldn't be what the story was meant to (I assume) so tl;dr me problem dw