Dec 17, 2024
And that is my first completed story in this contest, and it was a good one. Like Stew, I also congratulated you before, but excellent work on finishing 👏 I will try to follow your example. Avery did come into his own as the story progressed, and learned to seek out his own joy through independence. I’m also quite happy for Dorian as well. If I had to offer any critique, I would have liked to see a final reckoning with the mayor himself before he was jailed off-screen, but overly, this was wrapped up pretty cleanly. Well done.
