Dec 27, 2024
To:Deleted User
I was just playing, my friend. It’s all jokes on discord and it didn’t bother me. I later said I enjoy getting these critiques because it highlights areas I can fix, and the brief existential crises(is this the correct plural?) are necessary for my creative process. I encourage people to go all out when reviewing my work, and be totally honest. Whenever I receive genuine feedback, I can typically use it to make improvements. If not at first, then definitely after an editing pass. In this case, you were totally right. After my later chapters, this early section feels a bit random and could be better executed to fit the themes I’m going for. Please continue doing what you’re doing, and thank you for reading!