Nov 04, 2023
When you told me about the punctuation, I thought it was going to be bad, but it didn't bother me at all. So it sounds like nitpicking. I don't know if you updated before I looked, but I like it the way it is.
I was a little confused about what Chizuru is. I guess because you said "he gave me Chizuru," I thought it was some kind of toy. Misinterpretation on my part 😝
But after I read more I understand more. But on the end was not clear to me if Chizuru was real.
I really like the part where she said that: "I'd rather be Isekai". With the popularity of Isekai, it all makes sense. Gave me the idea to make a story about Thanatos tricking some NEETs into suicide to live in an Isekai that doesn't exist. I guess it's pretty easy if Thanatos uses this method, after all, you have to die to be Isekaied.
As the story progresses, I really like the ending. I guess because I like the concept of friendship making us cling to life even if is a little bit in this case. Like even though the bridge is down, Aoi still holds on to her feelings because of Chizuru. That is really sweet. ❤️
The tattoo ending was really cool, making Chizuru eternal and true timeless was pretty nice. 🕰️
I'm not sure if Aoi died at the end, but I prefer to imagine that she clung to life through her feelings for Chizuru and stayed alive until old.
