Jan 10, 2023

To:K.G. Law

Hey! Thanks for the suggestion, I was thinking about rewriting the prologue. To be more smooth and leave some clues for future chapters. Also, the prologue served just for people to make a picture of the world itself. Melvyn was supposed to be like their Jezus christ figure. Savor of the world, so yeah I gonna rework the prologue and will rewrite some first chapters to be smoother. Thanks again for commenting I really appreciate it.

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Jan 10, 2023

To:WALKER

Hey! WALKER, I am happy that you had the time to go through the prologue to my story. And yeah, I agree. I will need to rewrite the prologue. The thing was I transferred my story here from another site, Wattpad. it allowed posting pictures on the same page where you write. So I had a lot of pictures in this prologue to do some explaining. with them gone it reads a bit off. You didn't sound blunt or rude. I am used to hearing people say my novel suck. So your helpful insight really appreciated. Thanks again for sparing time. Cheers

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Jan 10, 2023

To:Kharla

Hey! It's me again. Just wanted to say, take your time, no pressure at all. Thanks for finding the time to reply. Cheers! Also, thanks for following back.

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Jan 10, 2023

To:Vforest

Thank you very much.

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Jan 10, 2023

Hey! What's up? Thanks for the follow, I follow you back.

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Jan 10, 2023

Hey! what's up, WALKER? I'm new here and looking for fellow writer friends. I was wondering if you would be interested in a mutual follow and read of each other's content. I understand if you're busy, but I would still appreciate it if you could follow me and read my content. I follow you and read your story anyway, cheers!

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Jan 10, 2023

Hey! what's up, Vforest? I'm new here and looking for fellow writer friends. I was wondering if you would be interested in a mutual follow and read of each other's content. I understand if you're busy, but I would still appreciate it if you could follow me and read my content. I follow you and read your story anyway, cheers!

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Jan 10, 2023

Hey! what's up, AaronBloodgood? I'm new here and looking for fellow writer friends. I was wondering if you would be interested in a mutual follow and read of each other's content. I understand if you're busy, but I would still appreciate it if you could follow me and read my content. I follow you and read your story anyway, cheers!

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Jan 10, 2023

Hey! what's up, kazesenken? I'm new here and looking for fellow writer friends. I was wondering if you would be interested in a mutual follow and read of each other's content. I understand if you're busy, but I would still appreciate it if you could follow me and read my content. I follow you and read your story anyway, cheers!

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Jan 10, 2023

Hey! what's up, darkone4587? I'm new here and looking for fellow writer friends. I was wondering if you would be interested in a mutual follow and read of each other's content. I understand if you're busy, but I would still appreciate it if you could follow me and read my content. I follow you and read your story anyway, cheers!

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Jan 10, 2023

Hey! what's up, Joguruen? I'm new here and looking for fellow writer friends. I was wondering if you would be interested in a mutual follow and read of each other's content. I understand if you're busy, but I would still appreciate it if you could follow me and read my content. I follow you and read your story anyway, cheers!

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Jan 10, 2023

Hey! what's up, TheGrompFather? I'm new here and looking for fellow writer friends. I was wondering if you would be interested in a mutual follow and read of each other's content. I understand if you're busy, but I would still appreciate it if you could follow me and read my content. I follow you and read your story anyway, cheers!

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Jan 10, 2023

Hey! what's up, Ochroleucous? I'm new here and looking for fellow writer friends. I was wondering if you would be interested in a mutual follow and read of each other's content. I understand if you're busy, but I would still appreciate it if you could follow me and read my content. I follow you and read your story anyway, cheers!

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Jan 10, 2023

Hey! what's up, UhhYolo? I'm new here and looking for fellow writer friends. I was wondering if you would be interested in a mutual follow and read of each other's content. I understand if you're busy, but I would still appreciate it if you could follow me and read my content. I follow you and read your story anyway, cheers!

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Jan 10, 2023

Hey! what's up, Kharla? I'm new here and looking for fellow writer friends. I was wondering if you would be interested in a mutual follow and read of each other's content. I understand if you're busy, but I would still appreciate it if you could follow me and read my content. I follow you and read your story anyway, cheers!

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