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Eytha

I'm an amateur writer for about 30 years, but I took it more seriously in the last 15 years. I write anime and light novel inspired stories. Shift is my primary story, but I do have others both completed and in progress. If there is a desire to see them as well let me know and I can work on it.

registered at: Jan 30, 2023

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Nov 24, 2025

To:spicarie

He does though it is still complicated and he has yet to process it properly.

Flesh is for Gods

Chapter:34

Nov 23, 2025

To:TheLeanna_M

That is a unique image to have. Yuu is contrary to expectations, though there is admittedly a method to his madness.

Flesh is for Gods

Chapter:33

Nov 23, 2025

To:Mara

Glad you're enjoying it!

Flesh is for Gods

Chapter:32

Nov 23, 2025

To:Mara

It was a buy one get one free sale on factions! But yeah, nothing is clean. There is no unity. Which is one of the running themes, so many objectives and motives all conflicting with each other.

Flesh is for Gods

Chapter:32

Nov 22, 2025

To:TheLeanna_M

You can technically sneak over to FictionPress for the original printing. But yeah, all the moving parts are finally getting exposed. It's a lot of sides. And things are starting to clash in different conflicts.

Flesh is for Gods

Chapter:32

Nov 22, 2025

To:Mara

Yeah, it definitely was a problem. And they've only piled up higher and more complicated now.

Flesh is for Gods

Chapter:31

Nov 21, 2025

To:TheLeanna_M

It is very messy and ugly. I do see some of the machines in this sort of too far gone state. Where they were programmed originally for war and to see humans are the enemy to tell. Once given freedom, it becomes a bit of war veterans coming home, what do you do when you were built and trained to fight and kill and hate, is normal even possible anymore? And so some machines are like that they just can't be normal anymore and in away its even worse than war vets because they didn't have a childhood so they've only known war and existing in society just isn't possible for them. Plus there is the laws and hate, which isn't helping fix these problems. So there are plenty of misguided or easy to manipulate machines still unable to give up the war. There are the machines that predate the war and we just workers, laborers, etc. and have a completely different view of society and just want to be able to live normally. Some can get coerced into bad groups. It's very messy. With different groups having different goals, motives and methods. Some have like goals, but their methods are far worse than another. And yeah Kiyoshi's true colors finally show themselves.

Flesh is for Gods

Chapter:31

Nov 21, 2025

To:TheLeanna_M

They definitely have deep ties and connections. Because I wanted machines to be just another lifeform, I didn't want them to be monolithic in their unity as it is easy to do. So they're as split and uncertain about what should happen as humans are. Which obviously makes things more complicated when you have terrorist groups bombing things, other groups trying to be peaceful and more doing backroom deals.

Flesh is for Gods

Chapter:30

Nov 21, 2025

Glad to hear it. With tensions and drama starting to mount, I start diving more into the different sides in play, the politics and maneuvering. There's a big table that a lot of people are at moving pieces and back room dealing. For technically a romance, there's a lot of non-romance things happening.

Flesh is for Gods

Chapter:30

Nov 20, 2025

To:Mara

It definitely looks that way.

Flesh is for Gods

Chapter:29

Nov 19, 2025

To:TheLeanna_M

It's pretty easy to get a bomb in if it looks like a human, acts like a human.

Flesh is for Gods

Chapter:28

Nov 19, 2025

To:TheLeanna_M

Yeah given the gravity of the information, even with a hesitant as Satoru was, I think most people would probably keep it to themselves. It's a big risk revealing that.

Flesh is for Gods

Chapter:26

Nov 17, 2025

To:Mara

Ah, very true that would be quite the dangerous action. People would want that sort of intel.

Flesh is for Gods

Chapter:26

Nov 17, 2025

To:Mara

What sort of bad feeling you getting?

Flesh is for Gods

Chapter:26

Nov 15, 2025

To:TheLeanna_M

There is a reason one of the genre tags is tragedy. Though maybe for different reasons than you're thinking. It is a grim world setting with a lot of sides and objectives and very few people seeing eye to eye on things. But yes Satoru is fairly childish and part of his arc is growing more confident in his beliefs rather than being in constant doubt and uncertainty. He is regularly being challenged on a rather naive viewport and needs to find what he can proudly believe in.

Flesh is for Gods

Chapter:25