Sep 16, 2023
It's always bitter sweet to finally reach the end of a story, especially one where you have a happy ending. You spend so much time with the characters that you feel connected to them, like they're really part of your life.
I had a lot of fun reading your story! Watching Jun go from his breakup depression to engagement with Claire was nothing short of an emotional trip. Not only was his journey heartfelt and entertaining, but it was also relieving to know he didn't need to die from a fated Truck-Kun accident.
As for the characters; I loved them all! Except for that guy during the festival that was mean to Mia. He can go drink dog water.
I think my favourite character was Madam Claire, just because of how much she really cared about Jun, and she had a birb familiar.
Mia definitely grew on me more then I thought she would. Seeing her character grow really makes the encounter with Amamiya at the end something special.
As for the story, it was so cute! Admittedly, I could see Madam Claire and Jun's relationship from the start.
🤭 She was the only consistent female character, and one who did everything for Jun. I'm glad they both made their world breaking engagement together, and will live happily for the rest of their lives! (Do they live forever now?)
As for the setting; your story had a lot of very well described settings where everything felt super lively. None of the places felt dead or too quiet. Everywhere had people doing their daily things, keeping the background of the world turning.
I always had an easy time picturing things in my head. My favourite spot to visit was the village, because it sounds so cozy and cute.
Once we hit the void, I think that was the only time my mind had a bit of trouble picturing things, so it filled in the empty space. (Pun intended)
As for the writing; I think the writing was very easy to keep up with. I never had a time where I felt like I was forced to keep pushing myself forward. (Although, it's rare for me to find something sloggy at all, at least with what I find interesting)
When I read a story, I never jump in without considering what the authors wanted me to experience. And I really feel like I could connect with this story. It made it enjoyable to see the passion and fun you put into these characters! I'll miss them after this! 😭❤️😖
